12 Seconds (#1 in Military series) - Reviews

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

I really like the idea of this book and hope it does well Sjsjjsnsnsnsmmsmdms dmsmmdnd dndndnndndndndnndndmdmmdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmdmmdmdmd

So far so good it’s not at the end and I am loving ever bit of it

It's good. I honestly did not thought it would be this good since the synopsis is not very attractive. I only was suppose to read a few chapters to see if it's a good story. Although it is

POTENTIAL SPOILER:This would be much higher. At least 4's across the board. However, in a semi-smut novel, the author has opted to make the MC a cringe, purity worshipping man. Thats why its not higher. I wont spoil the scene, but the MC blames a character for not being a virgin in a situation that clearly isnt her fault. Not cool. Outdated, immature and misogynist thinking.

I've only read a few chapters so far, but from what I see this novel has a lot of potential, good writing, and sweet dialogue so far, author please keep up the good work, I really hope you can bring out the potential of this novel ???