Nice story. The setting is almost perfect and good. I like the story very much. The first paragraph for the start was what made me like the story. Great work author. And I hope you don't stop posting the God level mage
Simply brilliant. Creativity that rivals Tolkien, a world abound with original, terrifying creatures that audibly made me gasp SEVERAL times. The writing is enthralling, the story is compelling, the characters so full of life in a world which reflects nothing but death. But above all that, this is a novel that does not underestimate the spirit of humanity. Every character is adapting, THRIVING, in this new world. They are intelligent and invoke that familiar feeling that what you're reading is not a mere book - it takes you far away into the world that the author wants you to see, and what a glorious sight it is. You have truly created something unique, author. Cheers.
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Hi!I am the author of this novel. Firstly, I really want to scream because I am so excited to finally released this novel! Yeay! *Hand Clapping for myself*.My name is Sabet, I am a female author who loves to play online game (too much). So that will be the main reason why I want to write a Game Novel, and boom! here we got LAST SHELTER ONLINE.My nationality is Indonesia, but currently I am active as a college student in number one Engineering Campus in Thailand. Yes, I got scholarship! But sadly, I can not graduate on time due to COVID-19 pandemic. And the bad news is, my scholarship will be run out soon. So I need to work hard to pay my study and my life in abroad (I can feel the MC here). I wish that my novel can be loved and enjoyed by everyone, I wish that I can win this biggest competition of WSA 2022. In order to do that, your support is very important to me.Best Wishes, Sabet_Saga.
Writing Quality: There are very few errors that caught, which is the obvious and very small mistakes that most non-English as a first language speakers have to deal with on a consistent basis. Everything is extremely well written and is easy to read, while flowing smoothly. Update Stability: Chapters are updated daily which is great! Nothing to say here!Story Development: Wow! What a great twist on the tower and system genres! The unique twist on Ho-Seok's ability is done well so far and the rewards he receives are a great boost to his powers! I can't wait to see how this progresses further and how OP he truly can become!Character Design: Ho-Seok is a well developed character. I rather enjoyed his interactions with Calin and they felt natural. None of the introduced characters have felt flat and each one has their own personalities to hate to love or love to hate on! World Background: The world is expansive! Unique areas and the tower provide an excellent focal point to expand into different regions with more variety. The author does a great job at writing the world around the characters and really draws you in. Overall: Not enough great things to say about this novel! Absolutely recommend checking it out and I promise it wont disappoint!
I love how hashiba came back just to tell yonome he was right all the long and told her to make it up to everyone I feel like after Chapter 14 yonome will have more character development
This novel looks awesome!! Please keep going with your work!! It looks interesting and captivating, and It's got a wonderful Mc, not the usual brainwashed idiot.
Here is my second book. I wrote this for fun and also for you guys to enjoy. By the way if you have suggestions, then you are free to give some. Thanks and have fun.
What is the tags for this ? This site is so useless even for tags i need to search in Google and most of the time need to searching in the Chinese sites
Nice!! keep goin thor.. gamer desa here support any Indonesian people who want to be novelis in webnovel. Wish the best for all Indonesian here.
Mc is one hell of a crazy guy. He’s not hesitated at all when he committed suicide (meaning, it may trigger some readers, so please consider this aspect of novel before reading - just because Mc can disregard his own life does not means the other should follow his example).
The author really creative when he utilize Mc’s power, cause Mc to be able to do something similar to teleport. This guy is also crazy enough to kill himself so many times to gain point or grid skills. (Well, consider his past life, it is to be expected for Mc to be a bit of a bonker). Any future plans to created a bunker in the apocalypse are quite promising, but sadly because of the disappearance of the author, we are unable to see it come to fruition.
Translation seems to be fine. Book writing seems to be very *******ish, with rules and explanations all over the place. Book is written in chronological order but explanations for events and the “system” are unclear and explained at seemingly random times, usually in the form of garble.
Story appears to be somewhere in between a comedy and a cultivation adventure novel with game elements, but it doesn’t really succeed with either and is neither funny or intuitive.
Author has an addiction to using girl-related analogies to explain his feelings regarding certain topics.
The actual reasons for events in question are poorly written and glossed over, story is not up to standard.