A good novel and the Autor did well.
Everyone knows this one person, yes, the one who's bad at playing RimWorld. Dude, I'm kind of frustrated but it's the good type of being frustrated.
Ofc I like it.
Love you bro hame kab se versatile mage padhna tha aur aapne thoda naya concept mysterious man ka laya voh badhiya lag rha hai esse chalte raheyi
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there's no space for copies... not just cheats, the enrendo and what disgusts me the most....
raw link plz
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plz boss post more
Hey Guys, Author's Review here.
This is a very good read, that much I would have said even if I was not the author here.
So read it and give it a try.
I give it 5/5 rating.
Let's see......
Writing Quality: I am a newbie author, but even then I have a good grasp of Grammar so, don't expect Grammatically incorrect sentences, there can be sometimes a few typos of forgotten words but that's understandable I'm not a machine
Story: Story is a slow pace at first which will evolve into normal pace around 15th chapter, 1st few chapters are basically slow to showcase the world.
Character Design: Every character is important there won't be a single character who will speak like a bot and I have a lot of confidence to create good characters.
Updates: Unless I have a real life crisis I will update according to what RR I have given.
World background: A medival fantasy, with a lot of sci-fi elements, anything else would be a spoiler
The synopsis attracted me
The story enchante me
Amazing
Placed this in my library and waiting for further updates
Keep up the good work, youve got something herr author
Honestly one of the best written things on the site ive seen. The plot development, quality of writing, and obvious experience with human interaction (which sadly most who write on here dont have) all make it amazing. Personally, i prefer to read things that are either neutral in their views, with some LGBTQ+ relationships and some not, or just no relationships at all, as when i and many other readers come onto the site they are mainly looking for a good read that is usually action packed, or has an amazing plot like this one. The only reason i will not continue reading this is because of the way i choose to read. I try to stay away from social/societal issues when reading because they are what are making me want to read in the first place. As of chapter 30, which is what ive read up to, there has been mostly no issues being brought up, but as the story started getting more fleshed out the more i realized one of the main topics that would be discussed and very prevalent would be the opinions people have on the lgbt community. An example of a story that is similar to this in terms of how fleshed out the story is, and explanations would be Zombie Knight. If you have time i would really you read a bit of it as it would greatly improve the already amazing story you have created. Overall a 5, but will not be reading as it will probably just take a toll on my mind i dont currently need or want.
I've read upto chapter 2 and honestly, the storyline is quite interesting, especially the characters. There are some typos but they can be ignored. Really looking forward to the future chapters
Decent story but the author keeps making sneaky little edits. Like dang just finish revising before you post, sheesh.
OP might be cracked in the head, she just posts whenever but like every day…
Sus.