Djeezer
"None here, I'm returning with the group. Over."
I’m not sure where to start, really. The author’s style of writing is unique and it enhances the storytelling significantly as you are easily able to read into the emotions of the character. The plot itself is unsettling, but in a good way. Scenes are vivid in description and they weave into each other well. Only minor downside is that the chapters are a little short, but that is to be expected from a novel of this quality.
Amazing great but I think you should start with a few external creatures to reach the planet. Something like a space worm and then he can start cultivating creatures from space even if they are only 4th to 5th realm
this is an amazing booki love the storyline, it different and unique looking forward to more chapters ??
hey author! I have a few questions 1. did you drop this novel [ no uploades for many days(almost a month)]2. how many fmc and going to be in MC's harem3.if the novel is on hiatus then when will you start uploading again?*thanks for the reply in advance ?*
Enjoying work, please work on the issue of updates, been almost 20 days and only close to 3 chapters released so far. What is going on man?
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The novel is cool and interesting, the main and only heroine is interesting and tasteful, and the main character is good, not a beta or a degenerate (unfortunately there are few such main characters). There are signs of romance and I hope they will develop in the future. In general, I wish the author a pleasant writing of the novel. Sorry for my English but it is not my native language
Is English not your first language? this is an unreadable mess. Run on sentences, no paragraphs, no proper quotations and separations for spoken words. I mean what I was able to read seemed like it might be good but the atrocious grammar ruins it completely.
This book is literally and utterly mind blowing. I can't help but repeat reading the chapters while waiting for updates. Good job author.
Es la mejor novela que he visto de fútbol con sistema pero hay un par de rellenos bastante espesos y comienzos de capítulos repetitivos, literalmente se habrá ducha con como 60 veces normalmente 2 cada día si bien esta correcto de vez en cuando ponerlo todo el rato aburre
Story with no ending.. What happen? Hoping the author continue the work. The story is interesting enough, but the story line is moving so fast, hope author can make a story fast enough so the reader can really grab the foundation of story
