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esta es una de las mejores novelas en este sitio/aplicación así que 5 estrellas para mí______________________________________________________________________
FINALLY HERE!!! I'm gonna copy paste someone's review from NU @c600. By:criticalmindAn awesome novel. It's a kingdom building novel where the MC becoes a duke and starts reforming his territory with universal education, science and abolishing slavery etc. At the same time, he's fighting against evil cults, the church, various nobles and preparing for armageddon (Read the story for more details). It reminds me quite a bit of Release that witch except for the lack of romance and the fact that most of the rules of science are not the same and have to be rediscovered.The MC is likeable, actually uses whatever knowledge he has. He's not completely OP and depends on a large number of people. He uses his brain far more often than his predecessor's supposedly legendary strength.The other characters are memorable and well developed. There are a few 'genius' characters who turn his ideas into reality and even improve upon them quite a bit. The antagonists are quite smart. Their actions are more or less logical and they actually win some of the time.TL;DR An awesome, must read, kingdom building, tech building, political and action novel with a lot happening and a well written cast of characters.◼️◼️◼️
Reviewed at chp93:WQ(3/5) - There are some mistakes(typos, extra words, wrong sentence structures) but it's few and far in between. Nothing amazing but it's readable enough. SD(2/5) - I'm not a huge fan of the pacing of the story. It feels very "jerky". Like a car shifting gears too quick. The plot progression so far has been lacklustre in my opinion. The premise is interesting enough but can't raise the score above a solid 3. Now for the "plot" for those who care, pretty alright. It's decent but not ground-breaking. So far we have a few chps of Selena and MC. It mostly depends on your preference, pretty rough but still quite vanilla.CD(3/5) - I'm torn on this. The MC is interesting enough though frustrating at times. The issue is that the way the author introduces us to him as a character, there are far too many perspective shifts, it's told through flashbacks and having too many in any medium is never a good idea. It's fine to be used sparingly to show past events but thats the issue, here it's used as a tool to convey the MC's char to readers, even worse is it's in parts. It might contribute to that "jerky" feeling I get when reading. Now I commend the author for actually building side characters. For example, Selena and Verona are given a fair bit of screentime and inner monologues to give us an idea of their thoughts and character. This can be a double-edged sword however, as focus might be shifted off the MC. But I'm glad to say the author divided the focus quite well. Now why I'm torn on this is the fact I like the side char building but absolutely abhor the MC's char building itself. It feels inorganic and doesn't flow well compared to how the side chars are shown.US(4/5) - The author seems pretty consistent in his updates and actually responds to his audience.WB(4/5) - The world itself is slowly being built and honestly it would be a solid 3, I gave it a 4 just because it's piqued my interest and is genuinely interesting. The world the author is writing seems mysterious and intriguing, u can't help but think there are far deeper secrets due to the hints here and there. In conclusion, a decent but rough read. The idea is solid but the execution isn't. The pacing and plot of the story needs quite a fair bit of work, especially with the MC's char building. It just feels completely inorganic to show the character like this. But here's the great kicker, premium chps are locked at chp30. That is going to greatly hurt the exposure this novel is going to get. For the word count of chps, it's just not worth it. I might return to this novel in the future but so far it doesn't look too promising. All the best author and I hope this review helps.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
It would be good if it isn't fast paced. The story was too fast. Still good job. ✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✔✅✅✅✔✔✔✔
Está muy interesante y quiero seguir con la historia.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Extremelt inconsistent. Felt like two different novels. So yeah. People are thirsty so they’ll prob give this 5 stars for the dual cultivation
The MC behavior is like he was born in a royal family rather than a cultivation one. Cultivation family would give you more freedom if you are the strongest. Just look at the Ye family. The current strongest isn't the head of the family. He focus on his cultivation. A royal family would want the strongest be in command.
I for one enjoyed it I think you should continue making the book plz I hate how all these people are hating on the book when they probably only got to the first chapter
I like the story where not only the MC has a system but the monsters has it too and the way the author explain why the MC, despite his stats breaking over the limits still cant beat.the yeti and that is because of the body of the MC cant handle the OPness of the stats.