The story is very unusual. The main character just tries to live his life while using the gaming club. It is not sure where the story will get but I am looking for it.
I have been slacking off at work recently because I have found a good book. I would love it if you detail more on space wars together with those spirit beasts. I seek to indulge myself on the hot actions.
Nice work ???????..... But reading more books would help you avoiding errors. No offense tho✌️✌️✌️One love ???Keep it up ? ? ?????????
For the first hundred chapters or so, it’s a pretty typical ‘Pet Store’ novel. Typical ‘tragic’ back story, typical ‘hard working’ protag, typical little sister. Only missing fat best friend.
The world building is fairly spotty. It is a bit excessively described which isn’t too much of an issue if the author didn’t constant retcon himself. Make things to ‘extremely rare’ then everyone has it/knows about. Make some skills ‘extremely hard’, then bam no one is surprised by anyone who can do it.
For example, MC’s profession is supposed to be stupidly rare and hard to do. Only reason he’s good at it is because of his cheat and he has absolutely no foundation. Like an award winning inventor who dropped out of primary school and barely understands science. MC does the equivalent of memorising some books and suddenly he’s an expert at the job and no one is even suspicious? For a profession where people seem to be in triple digits in an entire ‘federation’ (or so the author makes you think at the beginning. Will soon realise that’s more bullshit)?
The actual world building feels like the author can’t decide between having a society in the Information Age or one set in fantasy. It’s some weird combination of the two that really doesn’t make sense.
There is whole list of normal cliches and plot holes I won’t go in to, but at least the book was entertaining for what I came for - pet evolution + business.
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Then I got past around 130 chapters. Hooo Boy. Hooooooo Boy.
Everything positive from the start of the book? Gone. Relationships? Pretty much ignored. World building? Jesus...
In one of the later chapters, the author mentioned the words ‘Acid Corrosion Queen Bee’ 33 times. 33 TIMES ONLY IN THE BOTTOM HALF. At least if it was a Wikipedia of Feys I might find some interesting information. But no, it was the same information packaged and reworded multiple times. Then this same information is repeated to me Ad Nauseam in later chapters as well.
This happens so many times I lost count. Then there was an entire chapter telling me stuff about a taxi bird fey. An entire chapter describing it. Again absolutely nothing interesting. No David Attenborough with his dulcet tones to do a voiceover. Drier than tumbleweed and even less useful.
He even has a ‘Master’ now. I don’t even get the point. Sure she gives some stuff, but there’s no teaching. No guiding. No tasks. But can’t forget to insert obligatory young master while MC hides his background.
If the book was around 3.5 in the first 100, it it’s easily tanked to a 1 now. The info dumping and repititiveness is absolutely atrocious. Never mind the fact the MC has pretty much become a combat guy now. Never mind that so called ‘support professions’ are still judged by combat. Never mind the confusing evolution mechanisms that seem to change every few chapters.
Ugh. Just another disappointing Chinese pseudo-Pokemon knockoff (fake pokeballs from a mega corporation included).
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I'm totally disappointed.. Thought the novel will be similar to "senior brother is too steady" where the mc is cautious n intelligent n thoroughly plans stuff n all.. but all I'm seeing in these 40 chapters is him selecting the safest choice based on the system's reward all the time, no matter if it's reasonable or not (giving tip in the hotel for example).. the mc can be totally brainless n just do whatever the system says.. the author tries to create an image of mc being smart but it's just turns out to be average and totally disappointing
One of the best novels I've ever read. Totally has the potential to be in the top 5 of the power rankings. Waiting for the next chapter eagerly!!!!!!!
Well narrated story..kept me hooked up...I am waiting when Evan will mature
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Author write chapters a bit fast....
If u can do that..it will be excellent......
Good book and good selection of characters. I am not a big fan of the systems novels but this... seems intriguing to me for some reasons... Keep up the work, Author!
I must confess, Jason is really smart and a great thinker but he still nurses the wound the death of his partner left In his heart...next chapter please!