Really good novel but really slow story development at the current rate it would take a thousand chapters by the time story gets to mid story , hoping the author could speed up
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Again with the anti Japanese racism, come on it's been 80 years guys............................................................................
trash novel fking waste of time
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Unlikeable, cringy, nationalistic fantasy. There's nothing good about this. A pointless discipleship novel set in a somewhat modern world (a couple decades ago I think).
Honestly Chinese nationalism is so disgusting, you won't see a sane man from any other country write anything like this. It's technically wish fulfilment but the wish fulfilment of some deranged chinese dude. If I transmigrated into this protagonist I'd just end myself on the spot, it's that bad.
I don't know what words I should use to describe this worthless abomination, no novel has ever left me this speechless. I feel like the score I'm giving this is too high since I've given novels that are 100x better the same score, I'd give it a negative number if I could. 0/5
Hey, everyone. Thank you for taking a look at my novel. As for many, this is my first attempt at writing, so I welcome constructive criticism.
There will be many things - transmigration, a system with a small twist, earning money while trying to cultivate and navigate through school. I just have too many interests, but I believe I will be able to incorporate them all in a healthy way.
There are two things I dislike in novels that first come to mind - meaningless nationalism and stupidly huge harems. I will try to address both. The school is, in fact, an international experimental school, and while I cannot refuse myself the pleasure of writing a harem novel, I will do my best to keep it romantic, realistic and not over-the-top.
Also, this first chapter was just a test of site's functionality. Stable updates will start from August, 1.
With that said, I shall shamelessly rate myself with 5 stars and invite you again to add Model Citizen to your library and take a look again in a few days!
Why did you stop…? It was a good story with too much potential, I was enjoying when Bam-! It stoped. Haah~ Anyway, good story.
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Loved it.
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First is writing quality. The writing quality of this novel is honestly not that good. There are many grammar and spelling errors, but the novel is still readable and you can still follow the flow, it's a 3.
Stability of updates is a solid 5. The author updates every 2 days about, which is good, and consistent, but could be better.
The story development is really slow in the beginning, you really have to get past the first 10 chapters for the pace to finally speed up, so it really was kind of a slug reading through the first 10 chapters. It's a solid 4, because afterwards, the story really picks up and gets good.
The character design is okay. To be honest, everything is really generic, there really isn't any uniqueness yet, but that's what you expect from a novel in this genre. So a solid 4, as there are ways to make it unique, but that you just didn't do.
Finally is the world background, the best part. There are many unique ideas in the world background, even though the frame was a little cliche. I was really surprised by the uniqueness some of the details brought, different from the generic feeling that the other parts of the story have. Definitely a well thought out world.
Overall, a pretty average novel. If the chapters were edited or given a proofread, so that the writing quality was better, and the story development was a little faster, one that hooked the reader in, I would have definitely put this book on my recommended list.
It's a good book author, with a good idea and a lot of potential. Continue your hard work!
御兽：我能简化战宠进化路线
Still ongoing 203 chapters so far but i think the translator change a few things