To be sincere, this is an actually good book. I love the main character, and the way the overall story is developing. I'm looking forward to more amazing chapters author, keep up the good work.
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The pacing is good, your characters are great especially Alexander, I love their design and development, the background is good and so are your descriptions and plot. Love the twists, overall a good story. Keep up the good work
The Good: The editing rarely makes mistakes and the writing is straightforward. The story moves along at a pace that laughs at the slow pace Chinese stories love. The author seems to have a vision and is writing it.
The Bad: We're definitely in wish fulfillment territory. The thing that seemed to take the longest was the MC getting his system. The MC borders on leaning on his plot armor and the 4th wall intentionally. Everything is kind of canned otherwise. Dateless loser? Quest to get one. Best friend shows up and immediately offers up his sister. Lots of things are explained by info dumps. The system is so helpful that the MC doesn't have to be smart. Multiple times the MC is in danger or is greedy and with a smile and raise of the hand, the system or the world bend to his will. I have put food effort into reading this, but even I have to stop after a few chapters to give myself a break. I've never seen MC struggle to overcome something and by now, I'm kind of tried of looking.
The characters are uninspired. The author, as far as I got, worked too hard showing us that their talent was wasted telling instead of showing. Most of the author's weaknesses are in their interpersonal and cultural understandings.
The greatest moment I encountered in the story, where the author was showing their spark, was when the FL spoke French. It was an opportunity for many things, but many, if not all, were wasted. The MC apparently spoke French too, a dead language, in the future, in an area with predominantly Chinese names. It could have been a moment to show the MC having a gap in his knowledge, and thus himself, or to use his skills or the system to overcome. Instead the MC was too cool for human weakness and was perfect. Yay.
My final conclusion is that while I look forward to the growth of this author, I'll be looking forward to their next book, rather than more chapters of this one. Whomever their editor and proofreader is, they have my praise and I hope the author realizes the blessing they have.
Got to say dude…im loving your book…and I’ve read a lot of them especially ones based on an apocalypse system…please keep it up!
Also for anyone who is checking the reviews…read this book…its a solid one.
This webnovel shows a lot of promise. Updating it every five days and the next day after it might not be a good stable update in my opinion, but the quality of the book itself is very amazing. However, just in case I just want to let the writer know one thing: Please, don't become edgy and try to use things for shock value, but from what I've read, it's a masterpiece.
this is a masterpiece ?....................................................................................................................
all i will say is "its super duper good"
Ohhhh mythology and grand empires this are the things I wish to read?.............................................................
The story is interesting in many ways. I for myself haven't read many female lead stories so it sort of a great sight for sore eyes or (whatever its called)
The best thing about the story is that it gets better and better. In the beginning the sentences weren't very detailed and felt a bit empty but as I just said it gets better and better and the progress of that is visble. The plot is interesting and I may not have read through all the chapters... yet. But I for sure will.
This is a good story and I like it very much and the character is not that dumb too and all the characters have given a good roles and hence what makes the story interesting is when the our mc gained new legacy of space and aurthor thanks for the amazing story and I hope that u will continue the story and people like me will definitely support u so thnx for this amazing story
Need to read more but so far so good I don't mind reading this novel long term unless they suddenly drop it or the updates are not stable enough