Interesting story.There are a few grammar and spelling errors at the start, but its still pretty easy to read so that's not really a problem.The original betrayal is quite... dramatic.Like the guy was clearly using some voodoo curses to get to that situation lol.The story seems fun enough and the new disciple character seems pretty fun.It's a decent read.Do check it out.
I’m caught up with the Translations. It had a decent start at first. But it quickly becomes more and more disappointing. Clearly this story is not well thought. There is Tragedy after tragedy. I have no idea what the freak going on!
Also Heroine said she did not want a extra person in their relationship. Yet then she says she can’t imagine how many concubines he’ll have in the future and pinches him. All of this was done in one chapter.
It’s just really forced man. Even the System been utterly useless and I don’t see this being a long-run novel.
It was promising, but it seems like it was dropped or hasn't been updated. Wish the author would keep writing it. I like how the MC is ruthless just to survive.
I couldn't read past the third chapter. This novel is a trashy one. The grammar is horrible...............,...........................................................
Nice plot, nice story, nice MC. Everything is amazing......
Its a good start.. I think I'm getting a hang of it now.. A boy lost in anoda body trying yo make everything work out and trying to understand everything.. Nice storyline....love it...keep it up authour..nd more updates pls
Reading is my passion, i think this is good, chapter is small, i believe i will read more in future, i will read more in future. I add in my library,
This story is great! Nice to see an MC being pushed into growth because he realises how weak he is from a near death experience rather than the cliched girl-dumping-boy or death of a family member. Plot is solid so far (ch.60) and I really want to see how the MCs growth continues on and the challenges he’ll face in the future, so,e of which has been alluded to already. Hope this gets picked up for continued tra elations!!
In my opinion, this novel isn’t #1 rank material, but the author is a genius for bribing ppl with extra chapters for power stones. Writing quality is not the worse but still pretty bad, lots of misspelling and wrong words used. Once example, ‘integration’ is frequently used instead of ‘interrogation’. Although this happens quite a lot, the real problem is the way the story is written. The writing style is too shallow, it doesn’t give you the sense that you are immersed in the story world. There are not enough details to describe the character and environment. Up to now I still can’t picture what the characters and the school look like. One reviewer compared this with Lord of the Mysteries, which is just absurd. The writing style of LoM makes you feel like you are inside the MC’s head, immersed in his thoughts, emotions, and actions. This novel feels like you’re reading a summary of the MC’s daily activities, it is detached and doesn’t bring you up close and personal.Story development is progressing nicely so far. Contains your typical tropes and plot armor, but it’s not as absurdly done as other webnovels. Not much else to say since the novel is just beginning.Character design: It’s too early to tell but so far just 2 characters have hints of hidden depth, which could lead somewhere interesting. For now, the characters seem very shallow. The characters need to be fleshed out more, especially regarding their physical descriptions. Vague descriptions like ‘short brown hair and tall figure’ and ‘long blonde hair and perfect proportions’ doesn’t cut it.World background has great potential. Not much is revealed yet, but there are portals to other worlds and different species and factions, which leaves much to be discovered. Overall, I like the novel. There are only 108 chapters released so far, so there is room for improvement. I look forward to seeing how this novel progresses, it definitely has great potential.
A total waste of time.The starting chapters were still interesting but later it follows the template:OP MC goes in seclusion. His sect almost destroyed.Returns, gets underestimated, kills everyone opposing him and they start begging.Repeat.Just the same repetition and no progress in story since forever.
Chronic deletion of reviews, pretentious author, horrendous writing. This author is a disgrace to this site.Can this even be considered a novel? It was so terribly written it felt like I was in a kindergarten classroom helping students edit their ‘essays’.All I can say is, there is no surprise that the author deletes reviews. How else would this novel have anything above a 3.0 without deleting them?This is definitely going in my roast reading list. Too bad you can’t delete that too, author.
Very elaborate story. Can only recommend the book. Although it is sometimes a bit unrealistic, it is nevertheless very entertaining. The chapters are rather on the longer side :) Hope this gets picked up finished the trial read!!!!