This story is one that i would like more if. I really hope it continues to progress. Author keep up the great work. I need more story. The only draw back is that we do not see enough of the merging of two lives. How is it going to work? I need to know more please
This is amazing i kinda have an idea of whats going on but i also dont but i just cant stop reading
Hello wonderful author here is my review. I love reading this novel and it's start. especially the twist where the Mc is now the deciple and she is the master. I wish you luck with your novel and I plan to continue reading. = )
hi, where do you live in tunisia exactly if it's possible for you to share this information because I am Tunisian to an I like your novel
Halo reader, i wrote this review after writing 70+ chapters and read hundreds of comments. So here is my honest review on my own work.
1. Its a slow start, i know the trending novel are currently a fireworks from the start. OP item or skill, etc. This one is a classic weak to strong novel. Even i dont really like the MC at the start. But i assure you it will change.
2. As much as it said historical, its not really true. It based on real world history but its still a fiction novel, so hope you enjoy the alternate earth.
3. The world and characters are the one i am confident with. i took a lot of time on them, but you can be the judge of that.
4. The grammer and writing stability should improve much from my last novel as i have more experience now. But please be forgiving if there still some mistake, as english is my second language.
Please give the novel a try and hope you can enjoy the adventure of Emery and how he became the earth's greatest magus.
Anyone got any info about the raw for this novel? Chinese title? Chap count? ........................................................Thanks!
Starts out great and is funny. It gets boring and repetitive really quick. I managed to stick around until chapter 340 but I think I'm giving up on it. No meaningful development happens to characters or to the story.
sigh I can't help but think all Chinese authors are masochists.... could you imagine ex. *my father raped my wife but from his perspective he was horny and I have a hot wife and he's blood all must be forgiven* sigh this is why I hate tragedy genre most Chinese authors do it wrong.
Although right now Im only here for xp, I still recommend you guys to read this. This books is a bomb and the characters are also amazing and well written
MC was confusing, with several personality shifts that didn’t seem to fit with his stated goals. Up to Ch 40 (when free stopped), it was more like a low-product, poorly managed store than anything like a bank. Banks do not keep reinvesting everything they have in the next deal. Thankfully, when MC got a money-equivalent he held onto a portion of it.
I will not even burn passes on this beyond 40, not to mention coins better spent elsewhere
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