There is a few spelling error here and there, only a few though, but it's still fun to read.Like the fact that it is kinda realistic and not like some other novel where 'the team is currently losing a game and the mc gog in and turn the game around', none of that BSI would say the mc have a good mentality, a little bit hot headed sometimes, but for good reason. Also love the fact that the mc is not overconfident or arrogant.Love the fact that you didn't make the other ignore and insolate the mc because he made it into the first team even though being so young.I like that the mc is becoming friend with everyone in the team, because football is a team game, it doesn't matter if your the best striker or the best defender you can't win the game alone.
i would have given this book a perfect score all around but the Arthur takes weeks and months to update the book! it causes ppl to loose interest in a this book , but i thinks if the writer puts time aside maybe at night if he or she has kids .or if they are on brake at work to do some updates i think this could be one of the best book on this book sight!❤❤❤❤??
This novel has a lot of misunderstandings and unnecessary drama.- The MC abandoned his wife and daughter to go to the army and become a man worthy of his wife and do not humiliate him anymore, but when he meets his wife and daughter, he does not show that he has improved . So what use were all those years of effort?- The MC is the worst, it has no dignity and pride because it is easily humiliated and insulted by anyone and it does not defend itself or retaliate.- The MC is an important figure in the army, owner of a large company and claims to be capable but when the time comes to prove that he is worthy, he acts like a fool and decides to hide his identity ...- All the characters lack intelligence and personality.(In conclusion, this novel is mediocre and lacks originality)Note: this review was written using the google translator.
Just wowww... I enjoying to read this novel..I realy thank u for this gift..I just wanted to tell u that how much I really enjoyed to read this novel..thank u authour..Keep rocking ?..l really excited to what is next adventure..Pls let me know
I thought this novel was completed thats why I syaryed reading.I hope tjis wil have an end.The other story from this apps I stopped because is mo end.I was in chapter1500 what a story.
....kids illegitimate while Daphne's kids inherit everything. Wow, still putting his mate last. He's no good. Why is she stuck with him. He's planning to be mated to another woman. Doesn't matter the circumstances.
It must be shocking for Aurora about Jacob, I can understand her. I am excited to watch Jacob and Aurora love tango........Loved the beginning by the way.
ok.. here goes.. 1. it was hard to follow at first because the grammar needs a lot of checking. 2. the storyline is actually not bad. just wish sometimes Alisha be a little different... and 3. author, work to polish your grammar and continue to publish. dont give it up!! much luv dear ♡
Do you have any books that are finished...?
I just love all Muse's ...️ books.
grrrr..where is the rest of this story..one chapter every other day is just BS
Awesome book!