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seriously? lol come on, i have nothing against the original author of this book, but when you said that this is a translated work despite the fact it's not is and the audacity to ask support on your patreon while just copy & pasting the mtl is ridiculous
Really?? Another one? A REINCARNATED PERSON who became a PRINCE, who was moved into the COLD PALACE, got a SIGN IN SYSTEM. There's no originality at all. I'm tired of this kind of novels; A prince/eunuch of the cold palace.
I keep it short and simple:
- most interesting/best non-human MC I have ever seen
- no plot holes found until now
- excellent worldbuilding (direct and background)
- consistent daily updates (even with bonus chapters)
- well thought out power system that gives the author much room for creativity in fights
- every major character is more then enough fleshed out to care about
in conclusion: pls read this if you haven't yet
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I personally enjoy the plot development and the characters (the second FL needs more screentime, please)...and what suprised me was the factual details the author included, for example, bullets calibre, military base facilities, science behind a abilities, etc...
Continue with this pacing of your hard work mr author, i wish the best for you and this work of yours...♥️♥️♥️
Overall great novel, mixing systems with eastern fantasy. Writing quality could use some work such as tense mistakes and the like, but it's not too big of a deal. A proofreader or browser extension like Grammarly can do the trick with ease. Keep it up, author, looking forward to see where this story will go.
This novel is very daft for several reasons lol it’s almost like the Mc is some form of idiotic masochist and I don’t know the whole point of writing the mc to be like a fool to nerf him or introduce face slapping but it’s quite silly giving someone cheats and not letting them even use anything close to its potential if you couldn’t bear to write an Mc like that then don’t give him the necessary cheats just makes him stupid. For example1. When the Mc is in an inanimate object he can simply tell the system to turn off and awaken his consciousness after a certain period and it’s literally like he just opened and closed his eyes. So why couldn’t he simply stay in one place turn of his consciousness for like 100,000 years and he’ll have more than enough energy to buy everything required to thrive and it’s not like he would be awake or even asleep that long it’ll pass in a literal blink of an eye for him don’t know what he is rushing for but it’s stupid to me a simple cheat he could use to get actually strong but he rather does something silly.2. Worst of all is why did he start cultivating with the absolute worst potential of body there is? It’s sad mad first you abandon the whole energy concept and go the cultivation route then you make the Mc a retard
Wow, a half-decent beast taming novel, for once. That said, there's a reason it's only half decent. Much of this makes no sense at all. If the MC's family praises the strong and enslaves the weak, why do they send kick all their children out to train abroad? How are they supposed to get stronger if beast taming uses so many resources? Why is the 'Strange Snowman' monster a FIRE type exotic beast? Why does the guy on the title look like a petrified Legolas? We may never know.
This book is full of nonsense with a spiteful evil protagonist with no brain. It uses cliche and arbitrary ranking systems to isolate the protagonist that come from nowhere to transparently manipulate the plot rather than give actual scale. Especially to try to justify his antisocial plot based on the literal theft of the lifeblood and talent of others sight unseen. Then to keep you from thinking about how he crippled a person at least as far as the character should know it creates a crises so the main character can be the hero. A transparent and trash manipilation. The farthest thing from feel-good.
Good ! especially enjoyed the fast pace, hope it remains the same! hope this gets selected !
A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US