Story seems well thought through. Characters aren't given much description(lead characters are featureless, others are described fantastically, but one would think that the main protagonists and antagonists would be described properly). Overall- good writing quality. Enjoyed the twists and progression of story.
I can't get past the grammer issues and repetitive sentences. Multiple paragraphs in the same chapter contradict themselves. The story may have had potential, but I can't continue this to find out.
AuthorI love paranormal books. I cant help myself. I hope you write more chapters so that I can catch up on my fav Kione. He makes me laugh. I cant explain why or how but all his statements are blunt and funny. Looking forward to reading more from you. Cheers.
I love the plot of the story as it’s very unique. In this review I will give small spoilers that are related to the characters and not the plot(unless it’s mentioned in the summary but not elaborate on to my liking). I will also have a kind of summary at the end for those that just don’t want to read this whole thing.So first off the story follows 5 characters with one being the MC and the rest being the group of people the Mc is depending on to escape. The group of 4 are quite a unique bunch in the sense that their personalities are different from each other. Im pretty sure that a lot of people who decide to read this story will like at least one of these 4. I wouldn’t exactly say that their interactions with each other make the story more entertaining but I would definitely say that it makes the story more engaging or compelling, making me want to see more. I will say that currently I feel that the author needs to have a chapter where the reader gets to see the thoughts, goals, and desires of the characters in relation to their situation. Although the author does a good job at making the reader understand who the characters are as a person through telling and showing. Though there’s only 18 chapters at the moment of writing this so I believe that this problem will be addressed.I personally hate how unsemetrical the Mc body is, but it’s well described and the Mc is quite the horror monster. As for the other characters, there’s one that’s well described but the rest are more glossed over but are decent enough in my opinion (but I don’t remember much of what their discription were except one cause that character seems to be the same one on the cover.) The pace of the story is, well I don’t know what to say about it currently. I do have opinions on it but I feel conflicted on what to say. Though the world building comes naturally and is interesting but also comes in bulk. As for how detailed the story is, I would say it’s in a good area of not being too much or too little in general.Characters=goodVeraity of characters(the ones we follow in specific)=amazingCharacter development= To early to say (as of writing this there’s only 18 chapters)Horror= the author knows how to describe horror monstersPlot development= unique and interesting The characters perspectives= we get a good idea on who they are as a person but there’s a lack of seeing their thoughts on their situation.Chapter releases= very inconsistent at the moment and the chapter length are somewhat inconsistent but generally short
This story is very good, I really enjoyed reading it.It will be interesting to see Thea Queen's journey in history and how she will grow as the story progresses.See you around,!!!!!I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I feel like i just scammed. I purchased coins to read this story but then I found out too late that its been months since it was last updated. Quite contrary to the promised 2-3 updates per day. So disappointing.
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Going good so far , definitely following it! No HAREM please!!
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Unexpectedly good novel I recommend reading this novel
going to restart the book from the beginning.... praying author keeps with it because its one of my top 5 webnovels and I really want to see where the story goes
The writing and characters are illogical and unless the mc lives in a different world where there is no law and order it makes no sense. People do whatever they want and hospitals throw dead bodies out on the sidewalk. Judges seemingly dont do their jobs anymore and people are illogicaly dumb. Mind you I have only read the first chapter and I will try to read more but if this is a habit then no I dont recommend this story in the least.
Honestly, ordinarily this work would be at least 4 stars for me. The attention to detail is fantastic as the author seems to notice the little bits about this type of world and using powers that other authors miss.
The writing itself is quite superb with the right mix of adjectives, vivid descriptions and no grammatical errors.
The pacing of the world is jarred, we learn about the new world insidiously; slowly and in a measured manner for multiple chapters and then all of a sudden, information is flying our way from nowhere. This works for this novel though because it creates suspense and carries the reader along.
The immediate flaw of the work is in character interactions, the characters are three-dimensional but in the author's attempt to make them very complex, they often come across as inconsistent, almost in-human.
But the biggest flaw and the main reason for my rating is the MC. He is passive, naive and hopelessly reactive. Unlike other MC's who make things happen and take control, the MC lets things happen and only does something when in a tight spot. As a result, he has somehow ended up being a toy for multiple powerful forces due to his sheer stupidity. He feels very half-hearted without a shred of resolve and thinks and acts like 21st century, first-world **** who has yet to stop suckling at his mother's teat.
He makes for an immensely frustrating read and has brought me to the brink of dropping this work multiple times. It is rare for such a good quality work to have one character Fuck it all up but somehow the author has managed to achieve that.
And I, as a reader, do not know whether to be impressed at the finesse required to achieve such or angry that such a good book has been made sub par by the individual meant to be its linchpin.