Hello folks! Author here.
Shamelessly trying to get your attention.
I hope you will react to this review and give my novel a read before you make any decision.
I wont give myself too many stars but I will promise you stable updates.
Getting started,read a the first chapters to be posted, and it looks promising. Perfect plot and character development.
Well meshed in the contemporary history of the crusade.
If you're facinated by Knight Templars, crusades, clash of religions, civilization. You got to try out this novel
Brooooo are you ever gonna continue in this story... I was massively hooked and kinda miss reading bout zephyrs adventures.
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nope, nooe, nopw, nopw, nope, nope, nope, nope, dont even bother reading thia, I've read different concept like this but this one is somehow worse
The first and second chapter gave me hope... and that’s it. There is nothing special about this story. It’s just potential being destroyed. The character with great intelligence can not adapt, the whole story is just boring. Still, respect for trying.
Great Novel I Hope the author uploads more soon. I still think Ronald should have MCdonald's last name instead of Kuangge. Did a good job!!!!!
I really wish a few things were different.
I like this novel, but it sorely lacks detail. Every arc doesn’ get fleshed out enough. Like when first visiting the origin native city I wish it had a few whole chapters on the atmosphere, markets, shops, people and shopping and trading things. Then a whole arc on the different market oppor tunities that the city and the human world that he can use to gain money and trade deals.
The worst part of the novel is the mc’s subjects, every single detail that would build up a relationship or positive image of the lord is missing.. instead it’s all the lord is soo nice (just continually says this in differnt ways, instead of mc doing something that would actually make it true)
Him selling his perfectly extracted stuff to only one shop was senseless. I really wish it had a arc about shopping around and making trade deals, instead of just one shop and no negotiation. This gets even worse though with the selling of blueprints, which gets worse again with the “negotiation” that happens for the first time.
Honestly though it’s a perfect framework to write an amazing book, but it’s missing the details and context… rather just writes summaries for most things.
i’ve already read the whole first book and was pleasantly surprised by the character development that the mc goes through, as well as the realistic behavior for most characters.
This is probably the most underrated novel of its genre. The characters are well designed and are believable as humans. The world is very well designed and the comedy is on POINT. Its a shame for the whole industry that it seems to be dropped
Good. Pretty good in my opinion. Unique transmigration plot despite there being a little bit of redundancies when writing. Appreciating this novel, I hope others take a chance and read this novel.
Is there, or will there be, a harem?
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Could you review the novel and fix the grammar please, there are many parts that come out complete paragraphs in capital letters that are uncoordinated, just as there are misspelled sentences and misspelled words that have their logic but being poorly written takes away the desire to continue reading , I hope the best to continue reading.