Keikokumars, I have read all your stories since they were first posted on Royalroadl years ago and remember waiting day by day for updates on this story till it was eventually finished. At the time, this story was one of my favorites, if not my number one favorite, as I loved the epic tale of regret, love and more importantly one man's undying quest to conquer the demons of his past which have haunted his every waking minute. While I will be the first to admit that overall your proise and dictation can come off a little bland and at times disharmonious with the improper use of either conjugation of word choice, I deeply enjoyed the tale that you weaved. When you decided to take down both this story and Novis Gaius from Royalroadl only to post it on Amazon, while I was disappointed at the time I also understood that this was probably your way of trying to follow your dreams while making money off of it. However seeing you post this story here with little in the way of changes in either the grammer/ syntax of your sentences or in the overall plot, I must confess that I am disappointed that such a high potential story has fallen short of my hopes. I came back to read this story after years since I wanted to reminisce on one of my favorite stories on Royalroadl only to find that it was no longer even available through payment on Amazon and is still only a little more than half way done on this site. I hope that you still finish fully posting this story so that others may read and enjoy the full tale, but only wish that if you are slowly reposting this story that you take the time to edit and improve on this story as the rest has already been written before.
Hmm, I will add it to my library, and check it out when more chapters.
This is my second comment about this novel. Just finished Volume 1. It is easily one of the top novels in the original section. You can feel the LOTM influence especially during the scenes where MC is thinking a lot. But, at the same time only real talent can let you write this. This story develops in it's own way and I'm so happy for that.
An excellent novel for anyone who wants to read something worthwhile in this genre. The author really thinks a lot about the characters and the world they live in. Scenes are entertaining and well written. Keep up the good work!
Still waiting for this to be continued.FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER
a great book and I hope it continues pls shshdhchfhdhdhxhfhdhfhfhrhfhfbxhdhehduehwjxucfbrjduxhdhduxhenwisup h bsishdbejdjdnendjdbdndjdhebdhdhdb
This was one of the promising story that I have read, Although the novel have a slow character development it was able to clearly show the MC's characteristics and how he reacts in his situation. It was a waste for it not to be chosen.
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Phle to Mera man ni kiya is book ko padhne ka lekin ja 1 din bilkul free tha TB padha aur book bahut badiya heAur me Puri rat is book ko padhta raha
I wished this hadn't entered hiatus or had been dropped, but oh well. Amazing story, overall.
Let me just say — this author knows how to pace a chapter. We go from catching giant fish, to selling them at market, to dividing the money, to the next plot hook about herbs, and somehow it all flows without feeling rushed or dragged out. The fish-catching scene opens with mystery (why do the fish leave?), builds to the payoff (five giant fish!), then immediately pivots to the social reward (villagers celebrating, clan head coming over). No lingering, no padding. Chapter 20 hits the market scene with the same energy — Su Sanlang haggling, the tax collectors showing up as a mini-conflict, the resolution where he outsmarts them by paying up strategically. Each beat serves the story. What I love most is how the author uses the money-counting scene as both a reward and a transition. We get to savor the 475 wen like it's real money (because it is to these characters), feel the family's joy, and then immediately — drums and gongs outside, village chief calling everyone — the next plot engine kicks in. No breathing room wasted. The Fu Bao book-reading detail at the end is a perfect structural note. She's 'immersed in reading her books' about time-traveling to ancient times and using recipes to build wealth — which is literally what she's doing. The author is winking at us while setting up the next arc. Tight, efficient, satisfying.