hmmmmm hmmmmmmm imma rate my own story i think its good ?
So far so good,........ Ps. Random word my auto correct generating : SDK you have any idea ? to do the work done on Monday for you in my account has to come for interview on Saturday or Monday and Friday morning my sweet lovely wishes for a long term investment banking and insurance for your reply on time ⌚ to the group is created for your reply on time ⌚ to the group is created for...
Catch up until Chapter 78. The story turned to be different than what I expected but as of now, I am liking everything. You should read it first and I saw a few tried to say this series had some similarities to Chinese novels but I guarantee you it is not. It is better. Not better as in the best but can be placed among the best read so far.
This story has a lot of potential. Hope mc is power hungry and ambitious and gains eternal life
Okay. First, I would like to thank the author for putting in the effort to design an intriguing story. Because no matter if the novel is enjoyable or not, the impressions and reactions we tend to have are precious memories along the journey of reading.Honestly, this novel had tons of potential, but the author couldn't excavate it accordingly. The first two chapters alone set in motion a chilling past and a strong foundation for future plot progression. After, that the next 50 or so chapters solidify the 7 main girls who would presumably accompany the MC for a long time. Until this, things were acceptable. It could be reasoned that the author was setting in motion all the important stuff and possible plot developments. But then, the novel started going downhill. There are a number of things conforming this.1. magus ranks up to 'half-magus emperor' in the 'myriad wonder stellar chart' were very clearly explained in the earliest chapters. So it's logical that you would expect the MC to reach and surpass these realms within reasonable time frame, even with considerable fights, mysteries, character development. But even after 500 chapters, MC is still at 'One-star' Mage rank. In this case the MC's level progression is agonizingly slow, which is one of the biggest letdowns in my opinion.2. Throughout the entire myriad chart saga, nothing of monumental importance seems to be happening, so arch nemesis, no climactic fights, no forming of allies fighting against a stronger force. 3. Around chapter 250, MC enters the so called ruins. At chapter 560, the ruins arc is still ongoing, whose time frame has already surpassed his journey through the entire chart.But, this novel also has some pretty good points. The translation is decent, characters are explored in detail, not just generically forgotten like extras. Bonding between MC and his partners is especially deep and they grow along with him, which is admirable coz most authors in these genres make the Harem of MC flower vases after a certain time. World building is also good but only the 'wonder myriad stellar chart' has been explained in detail so far and the strory revolves around the beast factions.So, the main point is that the novel is good and has massive possibilities, but the author has to work on the pacing, which in my opinion, has been too slow till now.
"Carl for what did your mother do that?"
"Ha? But we've done this for billions years. Then why can you say this is a game?" Light looked confused.
Temari stopped as she heard her name being called. At first she went on guard as she could be attacked but when she saw Naruto she relaxed and approached the group as well.
After the manager left you with a bruised arm, you started to wonder who they were for a min when a recently familiar voice shouted..
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
"Fine. How will I recognize him?"
"Bukan dia yang ku maksud, tadi aku melihat mu bersama seorang pria"