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Welp. since no one wants to give me a review. Read novel has many mysteries and hidden details so if you don't understand smth you'll most likely see and answer in a later chapter.I'll give a genuine review of my own novel when I'm above 100 chapters I guess.
One of the first CN novels I read, so maybe I am a bit biased, but I love this novel. Normally I cant recall that much information from a novel I read, but I can still recall quite a lot from this novel, to me that just goes to show how good it was to me.
1. Writing quality is bearable.
2. Story development is very forced. Every passive skills become useful with no setup in the next sentence. He would be peaceful for 3 months, gain a battle skill, and a conflict will arrise out of nowhere in the next sentence.
3. The MC is dumb. Sometimes having a dumb MC can be fun in a comedy. The problem is that this story tries to be dark. This makes the MC just frustrating. The only reason he can survive even a single day is that he got lucky and has a system. Worst of all, the MC is arrogant and thinks that he is smart while making the dumbest actions and statements.
4. Not sure about stability so I gave it a 3 as a middle value.
5. The background is terrible. The sect makes no sense and the rules the author introduces gets broken in the next. He does try to think of a "fresh" twist to a sect so I give 2 stars for effort.
The problem is that some archetypes are there for a reason. Sometimes that is just an inevitable outcome of logical progression. An example of this would be greedy and selfish people always being in power as the antagonist. This is inevitable when only those that are greefy and selfish can climb over others to gain the wealth and power they have.
Once you try to subvert expectations and break archetypes, it instead just breaks logic. So good attempt but poor execution.
Overall it was a poorly executed story with an interesting premise. I would not recommend.
I loved the story, characters, plot. The beginning was great, middle was fantastic. The climax... was where it dropped off. The pacing just went nuts and it really hurt the great things you had set up. So by the ending, the resolution just did not feel rewarding. for one, you developed Aria so well and she became one if the best characters, yet she gets zero screen time in the ending. Not to mention Yvonne. She was turning into a great antagonist but just gets thrown in the background then randomly written off. it's a shame because this story had so much potential and I still loved it. But it just gets extremely rushed to the ending. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and thanks for writing this story.
obviously I choose option 3 so I get a beautiful wife and a divine weapon, what more could I ask for?.....................................................
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I love your story name it is unique. the book cover is also good. the plot is well managed. The arrangements of characters are superb. keep it up waiting for the next.
haven't read a novel with a system like this, looks like it would be a good read
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I suggest all other people who's intrested in this situation, just take a look at my results in 2016 and 2017 Blitz World championships, and that should be enough... No need to listen for every crying babe, Tigran Petrosyan is always play Fair ! And if someone will continue Officially talk about me like that, we will meet in Court! God bless with true! True will never die ! Liers will kicked off...
It has been a fun read so far, the author has created a unique world. Despite the fast pace, the character development was good, which made the story enjoyable to read. Way to go author, all the best.
I think this book has great potential and the story seems great but the grammar can really use some work as it makes the book hard to read.