So I have read up to chapter 100 and I finally have decided to write a review. Here I will list the pros and cons that this story has and hopefully give the author some constructive criticism to further improve his writing.
PROS
1. Characters seem somewhat well written unlike some Chinese novels where every character seems like an arrogant brat.
2. Story premise is actually quite enjoyable to read.
3. MC is enjoyable to read about in my opinion.
CONS
1. Author seems he can't display characters emotions correctly yet. For example, in the elemental test, the MC gets a godly score with the ability to manipulate 6 different elements, and yet he doesn't even seem happy in the slightest. It seemed like, to me at least, that the MC was trying to score an impossible score.
2. Detail is mediocre at best. For example, going back to the elemental test, when the MC got tested there was no suspense, there was no detail on what the MC was feeling, there was no detail in anything he was seeing either. It just seemed like he was a robot devoid of any emotions.
3. The pace is wayyyyy too fast. It seems like one chapter he is traveling to some castle or city, and next chapter it's already 3 days in the future. Like I understand if the author was trying not to bore people with unnecessary content, but my man you gotta slow it down sometimes.
Honestly, this book could be one of my top books in webnovel if the author fixed up these mistakes in the writing. I hope once the author gets more experienced in writing, he will come back to this story and completely restart it. Yeah I guess it's a naïve hope, but you can let a man wish. Thanks for taking the time reading this long and boring review, much appreciated. Thanks to the author for writing this novel, and it seems to me a lot of people enjoy it aswell so good luck!
Average Novel...there are already a novel like this in orginal and that is popular.
bit better then this but mostly Same.
so I don't see spend my money and Time on something that already available in this site
Seven has done some amazing work so far and, from what I have read of this new project, that streak of awesome bossness is not going to end anytime soon. Keep up the good work Seven and may the Seven Sages of seven millennia bring glory and honor to this webnovel.
I absolutely Love this story. Everything from the FL & ML, supporting characters, and how the author uses Latin and other languages throughout the story when they converse. I don’t want to say too much so I’ll just say I’m In love and it’s a MUST read.
Hello! I know, I know, shameless self-review... but hey, anything else would only be hypocrisy on my part... why would anyone rate his own work as anything but close and dear to his heart?Anyway, I wouldn't want to spoil too much but figured some of my planned thoughts (at the time of writing this, the novel has just been posted) would serve as a good indication if you would like to give the story a try, or mayhaps not. Both are fine, and while I would miss you, my dear potential reader, in case you would decide to abandon me, I would respect your decision. At the very least, please give me the courtesy of telling me the reason, so I could continue to drive myself forward and improve! Writing is not just my passion, but currently, in these dark times, my only solace! --- When you check in for the first few chapters, you might grow confused and ask yourself: "Is this really a modern day, urban fantasy story? Why are we starting from the prehistoric era then? What is going on?Relax, my dear potential friend, there is nothing wrong! The first few chapters, serving as a sort of first mini-arc, will be playing out in the far past, showing an initial journey of self-growth and introduction to Aziel as an individual. I do not plan to push it for too long, but there are a few interesting ideas that were never explored in these novels, and I had this itch... As for the rest, this novel being a genuine submission for WPC #238 you may have an idea of where we are going. If not, or if you are reading this far in the future (...how's it there by the way? Is this stupid pandemic still raging on?), then allow me to copy the contest details here, as it would speak more without spoiling anything."Male Lead - Strong Acting WeakDon't judge a book by its cover. Someone who seems weak and pathetic might just turn out to be an almighty person concealing his overwhelming strength."
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First you say hes six then you say hes eight. Pick an age and stick with it. Second the mc has MAJOR rapist vibes. No idea Why he just comes off that way
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Instant five stars. Reason? It’s not rainbows and sunshines. It’s really hard to find a dark novel here in this sight, and the thoughts of this book’s MC is one of the most twisted I’ve ever read. Really hope this book continues and brings another piece of dark into light. Definitely recommended.
I was loving it but the writing has become super weird. They're using adjectives and adverbs in like a 4:1 ratio with nouns and verbs. it's super throwing my vibes while reading, it's almost impossible to engage with the story at this point. first 700 or 800 chapters were really good. I assume author is burning out.
atlast a novel in which the mc don't wanna cuck minato ...............................................................................................................