I read a lot of 'extra' stories and this is by far the best protagonist and side characters I came across so thumbs up on that author. Keep it up.
the only 5 stars was Character Design.Because it describes what I was visioning myself.
This novel has a ton of potential and in its early stages so far this is my review. World Making is really decent and the character growth and quality is steady and consistent, the upload consistency is amazing but author should be taking care of themself to not burn out. As I read the novel it kept me hooked for all 50 chapters some bits were funny and I like the dynamic between Rex and Chronos it gives it a light feel to the novel, action scenes are decent but needs a bit more description to them to give the reader the feel that they are with the MC during the fights. Keep up the work ARCADIAN I will follow your work closely.
I wanted to like this. The author appears to be good at writing and has some creative ideas, but 1 the world just never developed.. it’s some sort of school but the teachers and school layout not only make no sense, they break the suspension of disbelief. I’m pretty sure a school, even a magic school can’t be run the way it’s written. Add to that a mysterious main char where all you get are a bunch of disjointed flashbacks to sort of give you an idea of who he is and you find a guy you just can’t relate to which was the finishing touch for me. Maybe it gets better somewhere in the thirtieth chapter or so, but I’ll never know cause I have lost all interest in looking further.I’ve often heard that you only have a paragraph or 2 to interest someone in reading your book. And a couple of chapters to get them hooked enough to read to the end. Took way to long and if this starts to be a book you need to pay to open chapters, it won’t work cause you don’t hook them before the paywall.Good luck with your next try
This is a work of real high quality. The chapters are long but cover a whole lot of ground and incorporate some excellent characters and world building. The pacing is spot on and grips the reader right from the opening chapter. Prose is colorful, original and flows really well. You can tell the work has undergone some edits as typos are almost non-existent and the sentences are structured really well. The story is still developing at the stage I am up to, but I am certainly hooked at this point and will continue with this one till the end. Top quality entertainment. A really solid novel!
I can't believe this isn't more popular!! The sass, the quips, secretly op, but with limits. I devoured this.
I'm not gonna speak about Carol because let's he honest, she's a generic female lead. I am, however, going to talk about the supporting characters of the book and how well written they all are. Axel is a young man trying to make ends meet while trying to protect his family from his father while his mother refused to leave him because that's what abused women go through, assuming that their abuser loves them when they don't. This series does such a great job at creating and writing characters that won't only captivate you, but will also relate to everyday life. So, give the book a try, and don't be afraid to leave a 5 star review of your own✨
Povestea e bună bună dovadă scrisul e mai bine decât cea de înainte dar are nevoie de un harem cu cele mai frumoase femei Sansa Stark Margaery Tyrell Myrcella Baratheon Ygritte Arya Stark și Daenerys Targaryen.
so far it's got me hooked - the main character is very likeable
Suddenly there was a faint sound. "hei-hei, teacher is coming."
This world is divided into 2 world, first human world and secondly of course our world.
"Let's welcome Rioy Kiyoshi," said the person who was holding an object that could enlarge the sound.