Fantasic story so far, I saw an ad for it on another website, and decided to come take a look. The story and world building to the story is fantastic and sucked me right in. Every time there was a hole in the story, it was explained and elaborated on shortly after. I look forward to reading more!
The story line is awe..it started off with a basic concept and its not just base on telling the game story part but also touching the characters personal life's
It's an amazing story and the characters are fun to read and learn about. Its easy to understand what's happening and isn't very confusing at all, plus the characters development as the story progresses is just amazing.
I swear to Cthulu, this is a literary masterpiece.
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I'm giving my novel 5 stars.
A lecherous system and a perverted protagonist in a cultivation world with all kinds of beautiful women for the picking.
Does this novel not deserve 5 stars?
MEEP! MEEP!
I feel like this story is a good one for many reasons. The first reason being the writing quality as well as the story and the characters.
I find the MEEP a really fun character that I hope to see in almost every chapter. I also like how well the characters are described, and frankly like the prose in the story quite a lot.
The author seems really good at descriptions and also at characters judging his dialog and the quality of his work. Feels like reading a real translation, but a bit higher quality grammar wise.
Really well done story. Not too fast not too slow. The story is an original or at least one where I haven’t read yet. Do wish they uploaded more often.
Good
Best novel this week(4.5 star).Please chose this novel, even if it lacks racism( Everyone knows that Webnovel has a preference for xenophobic novels)
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