Wonderful story love the game aspect. Characters are charMing as all get out goofy fun and powerful is very much wish the author would come back and keep telling thus thus far amazing story
If i could give less then 1 star I would.
Thus novel went from quite good to litteral trash in 1 chapter. And by reading the comments I can tell its not just me who thinks that. If you are hesitating to read this book look at the comments on chapter 7.
Plenty of good ideas but idk why you decided to suddenly add 10 different cliches in 5chapters. The whole birthday party and pirate part is full of absurd situations brought by stupid decisions and extremely unlikely scenarios.
Suspension of disbelief can only take us so far.
The main problem is how scatered everything is. The MC is juggling twenty different things at the same time, both women and classes.
I know I wrote more about the problems than the qualities but both the power and the world itself is pretty cool and interesting. Idk if the arena thing is common but it’s the first time I’m seeing it and it’s creative.
Believer_X, your are making me hungry for more chaps.
Just keep sending them for me.
I just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying your story! This kind of genre usually hooks me, and you're nailing it. Keep up the fantastic work!
Haven’t read it but as soon as I saw the “Xia Peng” I decided it was not for me
A good story-telling is one of the factors that creates a perfect story and makes the story outstanding a lot. Additionally, both practicing Qi and comedy scenes are a perfect fit, they come out very well, good job, author!
You're a staring my eyes the I feel in love with it from the very 1st line it's pure and original I hope you dig deep making it breath taking
This has a great story line and always has me on my toes. It's one of my favorite novels so far. I think this could become a popular book one day
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Good Day Ladies and Gentleman, first Review so pls bear with me.
The Story so far is about a Boy who is bullied by his Schoolmates, loved by his adorable older sister (I really liked the Characterdesign) and looks for a Change of life. He goes into a Game and hopes to find what he is looking for. I don't wanna spoiler you guys so I just say there are some very funny and outstanding turns, which give hope the story.
The Writing quality is very good in my Opinion (I don't wanna use comments to "correct" the Author with my low quality 2nd language english. You can read the story without getting out of the flow.
Updates are Stable so far, 1 Chap for every day. (Much to the sorrow of the reader who wants more!)
Story development is hard to say. With 9 chapter so far you got a kinda well round development.
Character design is very good I think. So far we got some loveable persons aside from MC. And I hope that we got more of those chars. A little minus for the "God".
World background is in my Opinion a process in the first 20 chapter so I think there is something coming.
Well I hope I got someone to read this far and help you to animate you to read this story. I personally think it got some really good potential and you give it a chance. For you and the Author. Good day for you all and bye.
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