Hamiki
Profane prince of domination
vocation..what the fck...translator should've just said class ughh
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I really don't see the point of letting that artifact spirit live. I mean, would the book male lead die if she destroy that artifact in him? She could've done it from the start before she let it gain more power, right? Would it affect their book world if she destroyed said artifact? And it's not as if the male lead is still following the og script. This novel is confusing. I don't know if it's just because of the translation or because I haven't finished the story yet.
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using the Chinese name instead of the English name is confusing. anyone his first meet with Shania? what chapter?
I like the overall theme of this story. I just wish that it had been fleshed out more. Most stories at this point are somewhere between two and three hundred chapters while this one is is less than 50. Hopefully the author sees this and expands on the world background and character building especially in the early chapters. Overall a great story but poor depth and development.
So far it's good read!!~
truthfully if we compare it with your other novel, this novel is the best!!~
bla....bla.....bla.....bla......140 character is hard if I didn't have any complaint lol!~
well at least I hope there will be no cliches plot until the end!~
I would give a five star for this book a five star but I can’t trust this man and his characters. He updates a lot though and writes many a chapters.
Writing is pretty good, the updates seem to be coming out at a regular pace, the story seems to be developping at a good pace as well, I would recommend giving it a look.
Did the author got kicked in the head by a donkey? Or is he that in need of money? He could've just announce it first but no... was a good tbh, but what a waste smh.
I welcome you my friend who dares to read this story.
If you are brave enough to read this, what awaits you is a true feast of bad puns and even worse jokes that more often than not break the fourth wall and probably a few more.
Acctually, pretty much everything about this story is bad: stability of updates? Whenever the author feels like it! Story Development? is there even a story to develop?! Character Design? ... World Background? Well, ordinary... The only saving grace would be the writing quality which is top notch and the only thing that makes this abomination readable beyond the first few chapters!
But my brave warrior!, after all this you may be wondering: This story that should receive a rating of 1.8 according to Webnovel, how come it got a full 5 of 5 points?!?!?!
My friend, let me enlighten you! This story has long transcended the categories of the Webnovel scoring system! But alas, I definetely didnt lie when I called pretty much everything about this story bad!
"So how could this be?", you may ask yourself again!
Its actually very simple! Everything about this story (except the Writing quality), especially the jokes and puns, are so bad that they are acctually good again!
So my brave friend! If you really are brave enough and dare to adventure into these unknown waters, be ready to let out your inner child, or watever it is that you are, and embark on this journey of totaly brainless fun and humor and get ready to degenerate into some creature that definitely cant be called a child anymore! And believe me, its definitely worth it!!!
(Also, NSFW, like seriously, everyone will think you are stupid ;D )
