it's been great. I'm hoping to read more
I found a DIAMOND! I am actually shocked. Author WHAT IS THIS?You actually made a smart MC authors arent supposed to do thatMC isnt dense and makes a move on the heroines instead of having nose bleeds. When he like the MILF makes a move on the aunt too my man. You really doing this rightMC actually doesnt whine about not changing the plot or have long moral dilemmas about the plot changing if he does something but uses the knowledge to steal opportunities and growWhy author? its not supposed to be like this. So many other authors MC are like If I change something then I dont know the future anymore let me not do anything smh So far this has potential and the MC is utilizing the opportunities to grow and become stronger. This has really good potential dont screw this up
wow someone uploaded this many chapters kudos to you
A great story . really didn't think it would mention indian culture .
Look, I like the story a lot, and I plan to read it all. However, it feels like I’m in the story irl with ADHD because this motherfuckin MC goes on tangents SO frequently that I’m being driven insane.The amount of tangents that went on between fighting his first slime and writing his post makes me feel like the MC needs adderal immediately.
I liked how the story goes a Rollercoaster from happy moments to teary. If the author maintains a steady pace of publishing and improves more, who knows it could become more popular lol.Oh and I hope you make the chapters long, and when will you be showing more of those pics author?but what captivates me the most are those emotional moments
I really like this story and it's pacing is really good and Kodesh is my favourite character
Damn, this is good! The writing here reminds me a lot of Shadow Slave, which makes it a delight to read. I didn’t have much hope when I clicked to start reading, but as I read more, I got more immersed, and before I knew it, I had already read all the available chapters. I believe that if you change your cover to a more professional one (made by AI, in other words...) and avoid falling into clichés, this has immense potential. Keep writing and let your imagination flow without limits, author. Impress us!
What more could one possibly ask for?This is the type of book i would want to read during my free time. Basically,it serves it main purpose (it's not complicated and its easy to read). I'm rating this book five cos I really don't see a major flaw. Thumbs up ?
Please read the book.Like it, add to your library comment if you like it and how I can improve also can you please tell people who think would be interested to read it to try reading it.( also try to check out my other book Survival of the fittest : Rise of the Phoenix)
This story is SUPERR GUDD!! The writing is super top quality, its like with every word it just entices you to read Moreee!!! AND NOW WE HAVE LONGER CHAPTERS TOO!!! THIS IS SO GREAT!! I LOVE THIS
Engaging writing style and multi-dimensional characters — just a few chapters in, but I’m excited to see where this goes next.