Ignoring the blatant attempt to hook readers with the first 20 chaps before the gender reveal, the novel in itself is quite bad. Problem is, MC starts off by fighting and challenging and growing stronger day by day, only to be turned into a weak damsel who tries to hide their strength for meaningless reasons, and acts like a foolish brat. Like, all the good developments were exchanged for the sake of comedy around sweets. Characters are bad and unilateral, without any depth or complexity to them, especially MC. Always the most useless in most situations, never trying their best at anything, never improving past a point while others breeze past them. Stats slowly become meaningless, with MC never showing what they're capable off to others. At points, it seems like hiding their name and power and acting foolish become the main trope of the novel, without any actual seriousness from MC's side.A complete joke of a novel, with a complete joke of a character, who doesn't show any growth whatsoever. Honestly, even if you can get past the first 20 chaps, there's a lot of other things that quickly make you drop it.
The protagonist is just terrible he drools after every girl and can't get out of the "EaRtH MiNdSeT" so he doesn't kill people coming to kill him and just makes more problems for himself the world is nice and interesting and the writing style is great just the events and the protagonist are terrible to make matters short this book is just a problem solving book some thing happens to mc then mc wins the he makes a stupid decision and makes more problems for himself then he solves those problems that is the book in a nut shell
honestly my heart hurts a little after reading this
It us a rela story on some one's life and hope it will match with some others also. The writer aka Haji is reting his own real life story just by changing few names ?.
Well i can talk about many many many things about story and MC, but i only few sentences, read this novel to ch30,40 and you will understand.
First, let me say that my reviews of any book I do may seem harsh. They are meant help guide growth. However this author is by all accounts better than most on this site that I’ve had the chance to read. Although not a lot is known about the background of the “world(s)” the characters are developed to the point you feel invested in what happens to them. The author may not be the most stable of releasers, but he releases frequently and is trying to properly balance life and art. This is always a challenge for young authors and he deserves respect for trying to make sure the quality of his work doesn’t drop. I anticipate and expect great things to follow as LamenThief grows alongside his story. You would be wise to join before too many chapters pile up in front of you.
this story is really interesting and I hope it continues like this. to go into the details of why I liked then already even though an already popular theme the author managed to write an original story and that remains always interesting. moreover the main performance is rather well written when the other characters ben for the moment is not too much but saw how it starts I think the author will certainly continue to describe well and think of the other characters. author continuous like that
A nicely written story. You pay attention to how you write. Your main character is expressive, has a strong personality, and the story is captivating. I have no doubts that you can write. Waiting for more.Whish you endless inspiration!
5 star rating for a well put together story. It's embarassing to say but this is the first story I felt so attached to, 100% honesty. Reading this story gave me chills though, a man with that much power, i love, love, love it. Gotta say I look up to the author for having such talent.
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The story started well shaping up to be real antihero tale. But. Then he desided to change and. Be a. Hero for no real reason someone that good at. Killing and that driven would not change. There emo that easily. Or that fast making the story go downhill fast all in all. Started good showed real. Promise then went to sh. It