Other than some punctuation errors, this is a good book for sci-fi readers. Anyone reading the reviews, check it out before deciding whether to skip this. I don’t think you’ll regret it !While sci-fi is not my cup of tea, I was impressed by the level of detail and a hint of history added into the story. All in all, kudos to you author for creating a unique story !
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Is a great story write by an ******* author! I totally recommend it. The main characters are so funny and I like the way they interacted with each other. Only bémol is the fact that the updates are not stable enough.
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Pretty decent story so far. One thing I found annoying is how easy it is to steal cars which makes no sense for a more technology advanced society. The first car that was taken at least had the pretext of a spare key in the visor, after that people are stealing dozens of cars right and left. Even the heavily armed police vehicle was taken away without issue.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
this is kind of difficult to rate. On one hand the story got a great and interesting setting, and on the other the execution feels rushed and emotionless at point.x scenes are well written, emotional interactions are not.Honestly, I am nitpicking way too much on this an will probably continue reading this some time._____SPOILER(free to read chapters)____The thing that bothers me the most is that all human women he dates, without any explanation, are fine with just being FWBs with the MC. One girl had a crush on him for years.
To me, it's interesting to read this story not because the storyline only, it also have it's own evolution, and the writing is unique. For example, the MC asking the system to list down his ability. I hope he'll make some improvement, especially his grammar. That's all from me.
I feel that the way it was written was super dull, boring and just too unsatisfactory to even continue reading. I’m not sorry to say that I really dislike this novel. Will not continue reading it. After the first chapter people will ask themselves..”What even is this? What is with this horrendous senseless plot building up to...” Just to say, this was not a well thought out story. The way it was carried out was bad. One word to describe this novel...BAD. But to some other people they might want to trek on with this story and continue to journey with it. I applaud those whom continue on this road, there is no return from reading this mind numbing story. Sorry translators, editors, author, all those who read this. There is some offense within my words but I will not apologize for it but I do apologize for all your hard work. I thank you for wanting to translate this, thank you author for writing this even though I will not continue reading it. Editors thank you for working on this. May everyone praise all the hard work and glory unto you and everyone else.Farewell.