A well-thought-out novel with potential. The way the authors plot the events is intriguing, making the narrative worth reading.If you are interested in elements like intelligent monsters, magic, and systems, I recommend giving it a chance. Well done, author!
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Pretty good. ? It gets better in the later chapters, but the earlier ones are still great.
good and engaging interesting characters
yes, starting is not bad need to see more
whilst Leo pondered in his thoughts, he heard sounds coming from a direction. He walked a little toward where he heard sounds coming from. Not far from where he was originally, he saw the lady in the arms of a man. He watched as this "man" kissed and caressed the body of the lady he had dimmed in his mind as his "goddess". Looking at the scene before him, Leo gritted his teeth and tightly clenched his fist. He didn't know why he felt that way. He thought, I don't know this lady and from the look of things, i think i am dead. So still, why do I feel this emotion? What is making me "sad"?
Now quick heads up not until about chapter 50 or 51 does the main character get into the hole necromancy thing but the story build up is worth it and I'm really enjoying what the authors done so far and there is some mess ups with the he/her while the characters are speaker but other than that pretty good novel.
"Go with Dave's strategy, I don't want to say it but Lady Maria can only do so much with what she has" Scott said with determination. It hurt him to say those things to his former teacher, but he steeled his resolve. He was no longer a student anymore; Now he is a Guild Master and his Guild depends on him, he can't let his emotions and his past ties get in the way of their victory. He has to man up for his Guild.
There's not much for me to, just some concern about the MC's system. When I think about it, there's no need for the MC to work hard, he can just invest and invest then he'll get 10x rebate. That's why I'm hoping for the author to give a proper limitation its benefits. Moreover, in perspective, not all people are that easygoing. That they would help someone just by knowing their name or something, but I might be wrong. Maybe there's some hidden agenda or whatnot. Anyway, it's a good read.
Hey, author 5Star review here.I would even do more stars to this book if I could, tbh, I'm doing my best and I hope you guys will enjoy this funny, ecchi story.Make sure to leave a review, add to the collection and give power stones. The grinding is starting, WSA 2023 ???
The kid seems mc is a good guy but not. Excessively steals. He is smart but an idiot. His first hook up he plays the paramour. MC seems like he will be crazy op. When the author gave him a weakness (mana) he immediately gave him a work around.Gramatically the story is fine. I just think the story isnt for me.
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