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Very engaging story and the plot twist caught me by surprise! Kila is very well written and I want to see more of his adventures soon. Hoping for a part 2
Read up to pay for view chapters and dont want to download the app.So the review is up to chapter 44 and the score is based on a novel that wants to earn money. (Its a harsher score then some first time novel writers or fanfics.)Writing 4: No glaring mistakes found here. No big grammar mistakes and the sentences flow. It is written as a very light read. Stability 3: i checked and it isn't very stable. It is released around every 2 to 4 days but you wil be left uncertain exactly how many days there is between each chapter.Story 2: Very old man reincarnates and becomes OP. That is basicly the story. Where i got at chapter 44 you learn a little more and a big plot or arc seems to be coming but for the first 44 chapters there is none.Character 2: The mc is either mentally handicapped or the author has failed in his mission to write about someone who is 80+. The mc sounds more like a 15 to 20 years old who got reincarnated but if he was then all his previous life skill would make no sense. As such i believe the author wrote him as old. The parents are very accepting of everything around the mc to a fault. Furthermore the 3 females introduced are like most harem novels, just plain dumb when it involves the mc.Background 4: Actually enjoy the background and the abilities sounds nice.I do recommend to give it a try if you like a read where it doesnt go in depth. It's good for your casual i dont want to think and just read moments.
well translation su cks it's too heavy on Chinese culture and mythology ,one way a outsiders could read this is bye shutting down his rational part of the brainit's nothing new the initial settings a 100% copy of another older novel i think even the name of the sect is somewhat similar , as for the later part there are hundreds of novels with same setting of mc one with dao etc thou the cheat is somewhat different but core of it(lifespan ) is too present others this would still be good for Chinese readers but definitely not of international readers
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From what I’ve read so far it’s a astonishingly good book that has been able to keep me interested from the first sentence to the last and I hope that it will continue to be as great as it has been so far!
Good stuff! Give me more of that. My heart cannot stand the small amount of chapters. I want more
Overall, the first five chapters of this novel demonstrate a promising start to the story with well-developed characters and an immersive world-building.Lei Zhen, the protagonist, is introduced as a level-headed and calm individual, with a distinct lack of lustful behavior towards the mature woman clad in green robes, showing his character's depth and credibility. This is further reinforced by his clear and logical thought process, as seen in his decision to accept the default setting for his character creation rather than risking a time-consuming process of creating a new character from scratch.The world-building of the game, Magnolia, is also well-established, with the incorporation of the VRMMORPG aspect and the existence of different game classes for players to choose from. The concept of Unique Classes, obtainable through hidden missions and story quests, adds an additional layer of mystery and excitement for players.The system within the game is also well-explained, with the use of equipment providing bonus stats and the function of the scanner during character creation. However, the occurrence of the bug that transported Lei Zhen to the high-level Lux Forest raises questions about the reliability and stability of the game.One constructive criticism for the novel would be the lack of description and detail in the setting and environment of Lux Forest. While it is mentioned that the area is filled with greenery, more specific and immersive descriptions of the surroundings would further enhance the reader's experience and understanding of the character's location.Overall, the first five chapters of this novel have successfully drawn me in as a reader and piqued my interest in the story. I am excited to see how the plot progresses and how Lei Zhen's character will develop in the immersive world of Magnolia.
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The story is really good and it has a lot of potential to be one of the best novels that I have ever read. Hopefully the author start releasing more chapters.
I have to say that the story is pretty well written. The sex scenes are fine, and the plot is interesting enough. Good fucking stuff if I do say so myself.