I read up to 6 chapters and really couldn't be bothered anymore.
1. ML has high IQ but a negative EQ when it comes to girls. His "daily life" EQ is ok and knows how to consider other people's feelings...just not FL'S. So many misunderstandings one after the other because he doesn't understand how to interact.
2. Now these "misunderstandings" would be cute if both characters had redeeming characters worth waiting around for but that's not the goal here, therefore FL's attitude and character is absolute TRASH. She's cocky, entitled, probably spoiled and gets off on being the smartest one in class + submitting her test first.
(So as a reader, I don't give 2 shits about FLs anger...but our boy MC here, for some reason, takes a fancy to her. So his thoughts are either a) studying b) FL. BUT WE DON'T LIKE FL *flips table*)
3. When ML gets his system, he just uses it without question, gets a whole lot smarter. System is cool in the beginning...but then you realize it's really a flirt sensor. Bonus points for flirting, minus points for being bad at flirting.
And again, as someone who doesn't like FL. This flirt sensor is annoying.
Is this LN going to be a TRASH LN where the author constantly screws over the MC to force the plot forward? Just a few chapters ago the MC was screwed out of his 100million and the "emperor" title and everything else that went along with breaking a record. The author never fixed that for the MC. Now he his forcing the MC into another deathtrap and this isn't the first deathtrap that the author forced upon the MC. Is this entire plot of the LN going to be "FORCEFULLY SCREW THE MC"?!?!?!
I loved the fantasy-magical theme of the novel the imagination of the writter is wide and Amazing the flow of story was good but there were few Petty mistakes breaking the flaw of the novel like - punctuation mistakes, typography, grammatical errors but if the author works on these things nothing can stop this novel from rocking on.
a little cheer up dance for my author
best of luck
I was interested in the time loop type of story. I also want to know what could be at the end. I really like the pacing over the story and that the setting is in Germany. I like the way its paced and how the paragraphs are spaced. Its very easy to read and comfortable to read.
Yes this is a Good book... it has non cliche charcters and a interesting world here whIch is a rare thing here on webnovel at least from my experience but Yeah this novel really deserves way more attention than what it’s receiving right now and well it will be a terrible shame for it to not be picked.
Good story flow although a couple of parts in the beginning seemed a little forced. Still the author continued to improve throughout and even corrected the forced section through plot in latter chapters
Nggk ngerti bhs planet. Tapi tetap semangat buat yg nulis. Jngn patah semangat, terus berkarya. keep spirit. ganbate. arigato gozaimatsue. ...
One of my favorite books that I have read.
Why does everytime I vote the pwer stone had gone missing??????????????????????????????????????????
All around this story is average. It's a cultivation novel with typical cliches and a few typical features, but I haven't seen anything new yet. Sometimes that's good, because you just want to have an enjoyable read, and indeed some people love how "fast paced" the novel is, but not me.The grammar is near flawless but the author's command of the English language is lacking. Moments seem to drag on forever and the writing seems to circle itself in a repetitive manner. These things happen mostly due to a bland, unvarried word choice. For readers like me, with higher expectations, I'm simply bored from reading it.Plot-wise the story is average too. The world building doesnt seem very deep and there aren't very many characters, as if the author doesnt want to put the work in to making a large world. The time period and cultures aren't established (with either the use of objects, technology, or references). Nothing.Furthermore the magic system is lacking. Even by chapter 30, when the MC has broken through two planes, I still dont know what the planes are, what the consequences of cultivating improperly are, what the elements are, or how the elements are used (in combat) ect. Even by chapter 30 there has been only one fight and it was totally lackluster. Missed opportunity for demonstrating the magic system in action.Over all I would say average. I am still very impressed with the grammar, but there's unfortunately no character or charm to the writing. So even though it isn't distracting from the story, it is still detracting. Author should go back to rework scenes and actively use synonyms. Every adjective in a chapter should be unique. Every verb should be specifically chosen to best describe an action.
I would like to say that you are looking for comedy, cultivation, lots of events, and a MC that makes you to shake them and laugh at them, then this is the novel.The chapter starts off with a chase and you already get the idea of what is happening off the bat.I enjoy reading about Lee Tao cause Author writes him in an entertaining comedic way!Keep it up Author!!
This one is better than from almost all trials read available this time...Mc is neither simp nor dumb.Even if he has a cheat, he has to work hard to use it..... it's a good thing ?.All in all, recommend ?.