As a new author who doesn't really know a lot about how to write good stuff, I request you guys to give me 'Constructive' criticism. Whether it's a mistake in my grammar, sentence formation, etc.Also, I'm not doing this just to add another 5-star review to my novel.Definitely Not
I really love this story cause it's full of things that boost your imagination and let you go to places that you never know can exist with the idea of friendship and loyalty.
It is a story of a boy who tries to restart his life after his father dies in a car accident. The story is very nice and author has amazing writing skills. I would suggest everyone to read this novel.
Damn, it's that snail again!!!
what happened to tdg?!!
this snail is very unreliable... so I really can't get hyped up hearing about a new work, but anyway 5 stars as an encouragement...
HERE YE HERE YE...
WE COME HERE TODAY...TO PRAY TO THE GODS OF CN WEB NOVELS!
THAT THIS INTERESTING NOVEL...
MAY NOT FALL INTO TEMPTATION OF MULTIPLE CHAPTERS OF INFO DUMPS WITHOUT PLOT PROGRESSION!
THAT ITS CHARACTERS, MAY BE FULLY FLESHED OUT AND INTERESTING!
AND THAT THE MC MAY IN FACT FACE DIFFICULTIES AND NOT STEAMROLL THROUGH EVERY CONFLICT WITHOUT ANY TENSION!
AMEN!!!
Great story. It had dragged me along for a fantastic journey which I can’t forget and now that I’ve finished I’m left craving for more!
Please update soon!
This time I couldn’t finish to 60. Not worth it man. The nonsensical pace is ridiculous. I don’t mind the MC “pure” but he’s not very intelligent and always behaves heroically unnecessarily. I’m not surprised if there’s even a Reverse Rape a long the way...
Good novel, with an interesting premise. The only problem is that the book is very hard to read for a lot of it due to terrible grammar. In one chapter there were only 9 paragraphs without any mistakes. If you can't slog through that, then don't read this book.
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Good job on the plot. I like detective stories and action plots a lot, and I am looking forward to how its book works out. Good job author and keep up the good work. Good luck to you and looking forward to more chapters.
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So as of the current date, 5/9/20 (9/5/20 for you Euro types) the translation is in serious serious need of an editor that has more than two brain cells rubbing together in their head. That said, while desperately in need of an editor the story itself is still readable, the grammar, while bad, is not MTL-bad.The story itself, the characters so far, the world, the premise, they're all great, power levels aren't broken as of yet, MC isn't OP just reborn with memories and hella rich. No system or goldfinger. I enjoy these deep dive VRMMO type stories and this one is a nice take on it.