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Started really good, but now the MC has made almost no progress in 300 chapters.
I’m now just skipping a lot of chapters as they don’t add anything. The Mc has stayed in the same sect and realm for 320 chapters.
Really boring.
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Alright... The first chapter caught me off guard with a full explanation of ranks and leveling system. However, it's helpful as well since I can just go back in the first chapter to recall what rank it is on the ladder.
Anyway, beast souls or concepts related to people using the powers of the beasts always remind me of Heavenly Jewel Exchange.
It's a good read.
Please continue writing more.
Genuinely better than the majority in the same genre. I hope this isn't thrown out.
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Really an awesome story, didn't expected much when starting but was pleasantly surprised by the plot and World background, the story seems promising
Initially thought that this would be a promising read, but disappointment comes easily.
I think many things could have been handled with greater wisdom and intellect. Lots of misunderstandings brought about by the initial situation he already is in when we start the story - but there seems to be little to no attempt at any communication or reconciliation thus far (trial read). All parties are hot-blooded (but it's military, so ok I guess), but could be more military-esque by going through certain channels and utilizing certain resources.
It's a hot mess of a situation and a hot mess of an MC. Violence seems to be the only answer, and it doesn't solve the root of problems.
I am going to describe this novel with one single word:
SIMP
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Great book but you could separate that things they said and make things more clearer but overall great book and can't wait for more chapters
there is already a manhua of it. it's called I have 9 female disciples, it have around 200 chapters. there is already a manhua of it. it's called I have 9 female disciples, it have around 200 chapters.
First of all a great novel I like the characters the ability to travel to other worlds whenever the mc wants and I really only have one issue which is the constant calling of the girls he and him
I gotta say, this is probably my favourite book out there right now. I've only read the 40 chapters but the world building is very unique, and so is the point of view of the mc in this world. in short, love it.
So, firstly, Thank you so much Author, the story at the start is absolutely amazing. it intrigued me to read on.BUT after which, when the mc adopted the children, the story just went downhill... well it's a bit before that actually.The cards that only have 52 pieces are in front of mc when he need it, the antagonists are like 1D character with no brain, this also include mc after he got the children, the general that holy empire/kingdom literally sent to negotiate with gods, and even 7 lords of sin. it's just frustrating how the story started so high above average standard.I understand that the mc supposed to be smart, but what about other people who live for tens or more of years.The world background is definitely lacking, the mc read books for years without using any actual knowledge he gain from them. when he read general knowledge book, kingdoms on the continent isn't even mention. it's like we switched Author even.All in all I liked it before, but I'm sorry Author-san, I need to drop this soon.btw I can't wait to see how great your 2nd book will be when you write it with experience from this book, I'm sure it would be great, keep writing!! btw(2), i think i will read it a bit more bc i just don't have anymore books to read lol
