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Absolutely not a lot of things to say hi but you know how the hell you can do that before the end is the same bout as the last one in a row of course
Author with a new, amazing novel again!! Had been waiting for your work and finally it's here. Loved to read the chapters so far. Will be looking forward for more of "Online Bald Leveling" and MC's journey...[img=recommend][img=update]
this one would be filled with braindead characters and super..forced..plot..Armour . . .
It's a pretty bleh story. The writing isn't so great and although that is understandable for non native speakers, I'd have to say that the lack of character development, plot, and world design especially ruin it.
A recent trend has been sloppily throwing things from popular fiction into a system and making the MC OP. It's easy to do, but the outcome absolutely sucks especially if there is no good contextual world and plot development. And the MC? An okay choice but the flawness of his emotions and personality are serious, making him a flat one dimensional "edgy" ****.
I'm not really going to talk about OPness and realism as novels vary in the flavor, mood and focus. Novels with OP systems usually compensate the lack of rich plot with character development or humor. Author needs to find some aspect that is their own, that they can maximize the appeal of to the readers.
My suggestion would be to go back and produce a coherent plot, flesh out the characters by 500%, and most of all, at least describe the things and "evolutions" with enough depth so that it isn't just "oh hey, I had X tool which conveniently solves this current problem." I think the merit of the novel currently is exploration, specifically with what is the next evolutions? This definitely could be a possible way of improving the novel, and I leave it up to the author to try and improve it in his own way.
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This section of the novel is truly remarkable. The author's skillful use of language and vivid descriptions make it a captivating read.
In the early chapters right now chapter 6 specifically. I will say I am looking forward to what will happen in the future. Just curious but is the leveling system inspired by I Reincarnated as A Dragons Egg?
i love the concept of the story pretty much everything for someone who doesnt really like killing and just want somw world building kind a book. everything is good but the mc, he is kinda weak in character. there are parts that are completely hilarious. but i think you better explain why his farmer is different not just directly ending it as a bug. the storyline is getting boring too, atleast put some detail about what his doing or making. i think that you lack that part, all you want to show in your book how op he was and lazy but the title is about his farmers atleast give us some excitement of making this and that. its really lack something in that part. and the mc? he acts kinda stupid and annoying. atleast give him a personality that is firm. the story is a little weak too. have some terrible situations that makes the people in the story panic about their situation. just giving a beast tide is okay but not actualy saying what happen or their situation is not okay. and directly saying a lot of them dies a single night when you said its only difficult if they get stronger, i get it that its because of a certain system managers that the difficulty went up but it still unreasonable when the mc is not even facing that much. give us a feeling that the difficulty went up, not just a list of a lot of deaths. it made me like its not another news. you lack expressing that part
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I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT
Poorly written story
okay update rate
Story is slow and sometimes really froced so that it is weird the person who is absolute ***** becomes his finace and is frist weaker he beats her then gets suddenly stronger without reasons or explenation and 1 hits him
characters design is bad ***** got name from authors irl person who lifes by him so you can expect a ***** charakter for the entire story
worl background is not so good
I would never say no to genshin impact story and I give this story a good rating hoping that the author will update more frequently so that more people will be read this story.
Good work author