Okey to start of the premise of the story got me interested to check this story out. However the first chapter made me want to drop it like it’s hot. But decided to keep at it since you usually need 30-100 chapters in these kind of stories to get a real opinion. Let’s just say that while the writing did get better it honestly went from horrible to really bad and thats with an editor. The story overall is quite good though the MC and his choices are simply mindboogling. For instance a ton of information, settings and background is like how it is often done forced into us in large quantities but when it comes to the MC all rules and logic has no effect. I could probably go on and on about stuff like this but overall the story is decent but the writing is killing it, being similar to google translate or somthing on top of the fact that some words seems to be there simply to add to word count. I do appreciate that it has gotten better but in almost all the chapters it would seem a simple thing like reading what has been written would fix things. Like how in one of the chapters around ch 20 it is mentioned that Ashlyn is eating her dead parents only for the later part saying she’s eating the same diet as her parents.
just an extra warning, this does NOT get better. I've skimmed the raws and Victoria also ends up going psycho as a result of a series of very convoluted, messy time travel shenanigans. she ends up 'cheating' on him but not really but also does (when Victoria goes missing and leaves with Jordans brother to reunite with her father (normal clarke), Jordan believes that the Howard's have her captive so he agrees to marry Lauren in order to gain info on her location, upon learning of their soon to be marriage a distraught Victoria seeks out Jordans brother and sleeps with him.... later we find out its actually just Jordan's alternate identity from when time travels back to the past.. so Jordan ends up cucking himself and therefore getting front row seats to Victorias infedility. Naturally this causes him to be repulsed by her. This leads to a rift and eventually them splitting up, then..... emotionally wrecked she marries his uncle lol.... (whom she was previously comforted (not sexually) by during Jordans supposed death
Can we handle this?
Love it! It makes me glue to my seats. It is not dragging and straight forward. The storyline is amazing and worth reading. I love most is the female protagonist(Sienna) who knows how to fight, strong, smart, powerful and beautiful. Amazing how they handled the evil persons. Big thumbs up and kudos!
WELL DONE AUTHOR ... THANKS FOR THE FOR THIS AMAZING BOOK WILL LOOK FORWARD FOR YOUR OTHER BOOKS.
still no update
More pl ! Omg how stupid was he !!! N that Nate grrrrr he is a Dick ! How often you update ? Love the story so far
I love this story. Quite eager to know what's gonna happen next. Pls can you update daily?
Waves after waves of conflicts and suspense making the readers sit at the edge of their seats. Can’t wait to read the ending.
Love me some Al…….. best book yet
Great read
So I’m love with these characters and their story. Can’t wait for more chapters!