OMG TYTYTY holy I never thought this would get picked up so quickly and it's like 14 ch/wk my prayers have been answered, the great famine is over (and to those who say that the TL is worse than an MTL, any MTL reader can tell that you're lying. You will actually develop aneurysms and brain tumors from the MTL, and I haven't gotten any yet). Well, on to the actual review- This book is amazing; however, the MC isn't (too) OP. He has a good head on his shoulders, and that's about it. He uses this head of his to slowly evolve his city and T-rekt all the enemies that stand before him. It has the whole package of twists and turns, and one of my top 3 novels overall.
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Writing quality is dull and boring. There's unneeded censoring, improper use of pronouns, and unappealing descriptions for skills and ****.Story development is terrible, it's going at a steady pace but the obvious plot armor is too blinding to look at. There is absolutely no balancing and stats along with skills are just randomly slapped down while the author thinks, "No one is going to bother to calculate anything, so it's fine. I'm a genius for making mobs so overpowered that a lot of people are in an endless loop of crippling their accounts."Character design.. Oh man, oh ****... Main character is trash for someone who has 7 years of experience while also running a guild/team/whatever you want to call it. I thought, "C-tier? Must of been really behind." But it's quite obvious that the main character is a fucking retard who made his way from sheer luck. Regarding NPCs and other players, their personality and appeal is just as worse as the main character; they're just really stale fluff to add onto the MC's sub-par design.World background. Almost non-existent. Locations names are just dropped down in text, there is no descriptions to build up on the scenery. "It's a cave. It's a forest. It's a road. It's a village." I wouldn't care if the main character was absolute trash if there was an actual world out there and not some **** that was thrown down on the spot without any details.Final verdict - Not even worth to read as a throwaway. And why the **** are you putting so much time into explaining the benefits of the beta when he's going to lose everything when the game officially launches? Please improve the world development, a story isn't a story without an actual world to it.
I loved this novel im like 400 ch in and the story is realy intriguing not what i expected at all I love reincarnation novels but this one was so unique i didnt expect it at all i love that the story isnt bout the mc only and we get d/f povs and we meet other gods as well all in all one of the best novels ive read
I read this one in mtl, it combines the doulou and pokemon systems very well.The plot has "foundations
i think that with the mc statistics his battle power should be higher; he could fight against level 25 or + monster while on level 19 or 20.the novel has the harem tag but no much focus on it apparently I think I should focus on it a littleand the personality of the MC so far is great.**:i have a question?how is the appearance of mc? is he diabolically handsome or just a guy with medium appearance
No harm plsNo negetative IQ villains plsNo female fall in love at first sight due to some kind of stupid reasons plsNo stupid decisions pls No dodo birds pls...wait I take this one back I like dodo birds :) wait...they are extinct *D:*
*sigh* Another novel with an idiotic and ******ton character who wouldn’t know when to shut up or simply go with the flow. (The reviews are fake btw)
It's a meh for meDecent enough to pass your time and the quality of writing isnt that bad but isn't that good eitherIt's progressing really fast and from my experience with Chinese novels, I don't need to read the Mtl to know it's jumping straight right in the rabbit hole that most Chinese novels jump into these days
why dont author reply to me ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// mass realse it plz to make it in top or else it will be wasted and i dont want to see that
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Our MC returned to the past, but an interesting twist is that the people of Earth had transmigrated to another world filled with monsters. The plot is not bad, but there are some stereotypes including siscon. Not my cup of tea, but give it a go.