Damn this has been the best novel ever , this novel had it all ; Adventure, romance, action, comedy and even a pinch of slice of life this is so damn underrated I hope to get PT.2 cause I can't wait
“…oh shit.”That was my first reaction reading the synopsis. Its amazing. I love how the whole premise is set in a futuristic world. Although there is scope for improvement in the grammar, I like the overall dynamics of the characters.
Fantastic first chapter, got me instantly hooked. You can really tell a lot of thought goes into the novel as worldbuilding was great. Writing style is definitely up my ally!Great job!
ok so the reason i gave the writing quality a 4 star was because of the typographical errors,which I think the author should tend to,and the story development is great at least according to me especially when the story is yet to unfold,the reasons for rating the others this way is because I'm still expecting maybe as the story continues to develop i will rate it again.
Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
Your novel has potential, though there are only 7 chapters, for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....
The writer obviously kept viewing his book over and over again to get that many views tho I haven't read it(No synopsis if it's shit would have wasted my time)Nevertheless I would give it a 5 star since it manged to catch my attention
Can I have some fast pass chapters please? I'm omw running for those chapters. This web novel is quite entertaining so far. It's very interesting, with much inspiration from other amazing pieces of work out there. I can't wait to see how Mav improves and learn about the other types of powers that can be obtained in this fantastical world.
I just started reading this and am confused by something…..how can a goddess grant someone strength to someone so that they can kill someone she herself lost against, and let’s say she’s not giving him strength and only giving the tools he would need to build a strong enough foundation and he will rise in strength on his own…..why wouldn’t she use those tools herself??I will keep reading for now but I hope a good enough reason is there, it doesn’t have to be something complicated but at least the mc should question it and reason no matter how idiotic is given at least this will be better than just shutting our brain……….
i like how fast paced it is.and sonie must learn a very big lesson
the written has used a language that is comprehensive. the flow of the story is also smooth, am just eager to follow it up to the end.
It's good. The characters are fairly three dimensional. I enjoy that the three year old acts like a normalish three year old and not like a super genius, or you know Detective Conan. I'm looking forward to how the characters develop.