It got me hooked! Imagine, thinking that you got into an eerie place then turns out you're just dreaming. I love how you do your character design. It shows well on how your MC behaves. The description was pretty neat too. I enjoyed it. Good work ?
As a filipino I loved how horridly truthful the first chapter is. I can’t deny the painful lives people like how the protagonist is currently living. Definitely strums my heart strings. I would wanna read as peole with hardships build interesting stories. I would recommend although the author has some grammatical errors, here and there, but I’m not perfect. I’ll keep supporting you!
Jaoao???????????????????????????i love you daw sabi ni jc hahaha?????????????????????????????????
The novel is ok. the translation is a bit problematic as I beleive that the translator just translator tried to translate everything word for word. which caused some words be akward. The story development is also ok but I wouldnot say it best as everything was explained in casual fashion during conversations may be thats for the best. After reading 39 chapters, I still cannot get the total view of mc's character. The mc's character impression is not bold and noticeable as the story wants.
Amazing author keep up the good work and feeling ya but always update it cause we need update always .........................................................
This is not about cyberpunk 2077 Just so everybody knows. Mc Just gets thrown in a random world and needs to compete against players or something. And he needs to find something to change worlds? The whole story is confusing and Just throws you in the action. Its like a fanfic where we need to know the world beforehand. He gets a crew but they are some sort of Ai and self aware. Mc Just meet with 2 People from the crew and then gets sent to a race. Some chapters are too short.The grammar is good. World building is done poorlyWe have no characters designs. Story development is Fast. Maybe too Fast.Updating is Fast, but that is to be expected from a New story.
Holy shiii everythings perfect to the last shiii
Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book!
it's good honestly the story development is good alittle around about in some places but it gets to a point writing could use a tad bit touch in spelling here in there but you still get the message updates regularly everyday and world background you learn mainly as you read through over all I love this novel and I hope that anyone who reads this will too ?
Is this novel dropped? Wtf happends? No notice, no nothing. Suddenly just stopped updated. Please someone tell me what have become of this novels. Translator suddenly died or something?
the grammar and vocabulary are amazing! much better than I expected, each of the characters is so realistic based on their temperament, instead of sucking up the mc when they just met, they have their consideration. the world-building and power system is so fascinating, at least for now. keep up the great work!
————————————————————-—-???Great book with very interesting plot and characters. Recommend everyone to give it a try. ???——————————————————————