"Oh okay but I really don't understand what else you would mean"
Thank you Qidien!
The Oni still had the gall to flirt in the middle of an important operation! Helen was the main strategist behind the Dragon Lance Squad while Aruthos had taken the Commander position. The husband and wife combo was the strongest, most well-coordinated group among the elites of the space military division. Together, they oversaw the front-lines and held thirty percent of the total numbers of soldiers.
It was almost as if a snicker could be heard in his head, as the system answered him.
but theres one method!
It is a really great mix of Fantasy and Slice of LifeThis book is really fun to read. It’s a Fantasy Slice of Life story that feels fresh and relaxing. The pacing is just right—not too fast, not too slow—so it never gets boring or overwhelming.I really like how the characters are written. The relationships between the characters feel natural and enjoyable to follow. The world-building is also great, with lots of nice details that make the story more immersive without being too complicated.The writing is clear and easy to read, with no grammar issues. It’s a light and enjoyable novel, which makes it a nice change from other novels.I wish there were more books like this, with the perfect mix of Fantasy and Slice of Life. If you’re looking for a fun and relaxing read, I highly recommend this one!
This Book has piqued my Curiosity while scrolling and decided to give it a try.After reading all currently available chapters I found out...
stop até chap 15, dont like system slaves, The moment That goes, do The quest or Die.
you have a wonderful story, God bless ..
13+ chapters in and I can really say for sure that this one's a lot better than the original one, that one is not bad, but this one is a lot better. I just paraphrased what Daniiii said.?For the writing quality, I'd give it a 5. Why? Because I want to. Ugh, because there are hardly any mistakes and grammatical errors. The words used to describe what is happening and what's in Evin's mind are able to express those scenes clearly. Story development, there are a lot of changes here that author made, and I love those changes. The pacing of the story isn't as slow as the original one, just as author promised. For the characters, I love the changes you made with each and every one of their own stories. I especially like the concept you thought of with Endra's spirit or whatever his name here is and Evin's. Now I'm wondering how different the other characters are. Lasty, this world background, author made a lot of changes, but I'm sure he will do a good job here. That's all for now... maybe will add a few things next time.
So far it's a pretty good fan fiction. We just need to hope DJason doesn't either drop it or drop the quality, but from what I've read so far it deserves a five
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