I really do love this amazing book, it's really perfect and really interesting to read ☺️☺️, Like seriously, I really love the book so very much ??..keep it up author ?
Just another repetitive face slapping novel where the mc gets 60 million dollars in one chapter and a sportscar for breathing. It then is just on repeat of faceslapping 101
Author, don't feel down trodden your work isn't perfect but then again no book is perfect. Not everyone will like your story-telling but that doesn't mean you have to change your story to fit their exact desires. Create the story you like, obviously improve on some logistical points like timeline, history reference accuracy, mythology accuracy and grammar. I saw many comments disdaining the usage of hypnosis for kingdom building, personally it doesn't matter as long as it matches the MC's personality. It does seem a little rushed however. Damn this was a long comment, keep up the good work!
God if reincarnation is real make me reincarnate with this kind of system because The Amount of Potinal I see is off the roof however the Mc is so dumb that I got to a point where I had to ask myself what the author was thinking while writingAnyway, you probably improved A lot from the start but I believe there is no point in continuing.
Good so far
A sweet begining. It's definitely going to be an interesting read. Keep it up author.
It is worth reading
I think it's about time the author wraps up this story after this trip
i absolutely love this book you can really feel for the characters
When will be the next update?
Great story so far!! Can’t wait for more chapters
very good author,I love the story so much.........