Maybe a bit too early to make a review, but I decided to make one for now. Great MC, I like his character and the story line. The writing quality is very good along with the world building. You have the right to be biased since it's your work. Yet, don't make it easier for the MC despite the fact that he had died once and now had a host system.
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Beta MC with Hero Complex.. ?Disappointing.... .. ... .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .... . ... .. .. ..... ... ........ .. .. .. .. .
I have been coerced to write a review for straight vanilla romance by the author. It's about a fox girl in a apocalyptic world...if the title doesn't give it away /heavy sarcasm. It is however begrudgingly a good novel despite being straight, with it at least having a side yuri couple. It has good fight scenes, and decent chemistry between the characters, so actually try checking it out when you're free. Oh and it doesn't have any obvious plot holes if that's something that annoys you, and the setting of the novel is actually pretty good.
well, although the writing quality is a bit low but still it's much better than reading those novels on trail read where everything is like 100x bonus, 10000x bonus, being fully OP from the very start. A nice read for me, just keep updating regularly ?
Thank you all for giving my novel a chance. I am a very active author as I read daily on Webnovel as well. I will try to respond to all questions you have and appreciate any criticism you have that can help me improve. I hope you enjoy The Archaic System - A New Beginning!
This is a good story, with good development and world background. But i think it needs an editor. this story can be evolved to like monster paradise if author want it. Just give it a personal touch It's nearly three weeks and still no sign of coming back. NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!
To be completely honest, i started crying while reading this. I loved this so much!! Thank you for such amazing content you create for us!!!
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I have not laughed this hard in forever. The myth-related jokes kill me. Author is a pro writer, and it shows. Chapters seem like actual time and effort went into them, no "filler bc I need to make update schedule" bs, and great grammar, no typos. Mostly though I love the story. Awesome myths so far, cool world-building, and MC is a funny mix of awesome and socially awkward. Bonus, the girl characters don't suck! Whattt?! A gamer novel without tons of annoying sexism?! Crazy.
Can’t read a lot of it with out losing brain cells because it’s trash and trash is what Webnovel is becoming right now due to what they are doing to the website. I wish the website is bought someone who restore webnovel.