Before I start reading the sequel, this 5-star review is just for the love and respect I have for this masterpiece's prequel, a genuine review will be posted once I read up to 200 chapters at the very least and I hardly believe it would be less than 4 (P.S.: all thanks to the phenomenal skills of our dear author). Until then thank you, author.
One word: Awesome. The writing style, plot, grammer, vocab. Everything is phenomenal. Keep it up, I can't wait for more. You're really talented.
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I've read the novel and I can say that the grammar really improves every chapter. You can really see the effort the Author puts in every chapter. I really love this story, Waiting for future updates:)
I think that this is an interesting story. I like the whole pre-historic concept and the world background that I want to keep reading it.I also like that the male lead is dependable and has a good head on his shoulders. Good job Author!
REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean)
Lord have mercy, this is some amazing content!
I am utterly in love with the authors writing skills, they are out of this world! I bow in amazement, and give you you're well-deserved crown!
The story is original, well thought of, and contains some amazing characters! Other than that, i love how long the chapters are - something a lot of people on this app slack on, but not you!
I will definitely come back for more, no doubt about it.
Thank you for sharing this amazing content with us, dear author <3
Finally finished this work... (Which is it is written till now) and I'm glad that I did. This review is from a reader who has read all the chapters currently available. And people who are looking for an awesome book to latch and get addicted to, this is the one!!. A very well-planned and executed work with a touch of professionalism. There's no major errors in the story at any time. Thank you author and please continue this book with the same quality and pace!!!
This story seems really god the man character is interesting (although did you mean for him to seem so sociopathic in the early chapters? I mean he says hes okay with being an npc because he was getting bored) but more than that, please god run the early chapters through grammerly or a read-to-text or something cause this story is great but my god i actually can’t understand what you mean in some of the paragraphs without like 10 careful rereads
Story is greatly comprehensive and reasonable.it can be improve with time.(with proper editing and solving after grammar mistakes.)I hope I can further improve my writing capabilities.Thankyou
As of right now, the most important thing I can say is “give me more chapters!!!!!” I have not read any of the original source material (raws), but I am enjoying the translation, if not for the slow release. I assume as this is a newbie translator, they aren’t currently able to pump out chapters due to translation speed/real life. They have been very good with grammer and translating into English. As for the content, I have seen the antagonist vs. protagonist setting before, but this novel makes the MC out to be competent and intellegent (his decision making processes are fairly sound so far). I am curious to see what will happen once he “wins,” but that is for another time.