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Amazing storyline, would like to see what's next for Audrey and Aiden
I only got through 12 chapters. So take the review for what it’s worth.
The mc of this story is supposed to be someone who is reborn into the game world prior to the game going live. The mc is someone who was involved in the end battle between the game company and the resistance.
This premise sets the character up as being a high level character who should know a lot about the game. What we get however is someone who seems to be fumbling around without a clear goal. Don’t worry though because almost every chapter he wants to plan what he is going to do.
This story has a similar premise to legendary mechanic but unfortunately doesn’t hit the mark to keep readers interested. Many chapter comments say “boring”. I have to agree and it is primarily because the mc is bumbling around like someone who is playing the game for the first time in their life with a pro friend giving him hints on things to make his life easier like how to develop skills instead of being a veteran player himself.
I had high hopes but I’m gonna pass on the rest of this one.
Well, in the beginning, the story begins with just an ordinary young man, but he is different from his peers in some aspects, especially in his way of thinking, but you should know that any beautiful novel is at the beginning ordinary and a little boring, and this is due to the writer’s desire to build the world and a logical development of the character of the hero and his definition of the main plot that With it, noticeable development will begin in many aspects. The story is beautiful and has a promising future compared to current stories, so I recommend it.
Looks like a fresh new take and fun story about reincarnated mc. The beginning already looks intense so excited to see where this one goes.
Author-sama, Can you pass the Discord link?, the other one does not work for me
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I've read the author other fanfic "Reincarnated in my own Douluo Dalu Fanfiction?!" and I loved it very much.
So obviously I believe this one will be just as good so I will give it a five star review to start its career hehe.
Good luck author!
In the first place, I personally love this novel so my review may be a lil warped.
Ok so translation quality is in my opinion top notch such that the more immersed you are in the storyline there is no worry about translation quality ruining it.
Update stability, I guess thats the only real problem i got since the quality of the translation is so good makes it feel as though there aren`t enough chapters (realistically though i know am being greedy lol).
I love the story development absolutely realistic characters who make the novel that much better and overall engaging.
As for the world building its one of the best i have seen crafted, personally its a wonderful novel with boundless potential(lets not even talk about Chu Feng, the Black Yak or for that matter or for that matter Yellow Ox). Engaging storyline and all in all fantastic read.
Meh... Not so good. Just readable because of its comedic tone. MC cheats are too OP and completely unreasonable. Author wants to make story a bit serious at some places, but with this f**king MC who is treating his new life like some sort of game, it seems ridiculous. MC is too lazy to check out the benefits of his system (though the system is even more fucking ridiculous).
If you are out of any good novels like me, you can read it. Else.... come here after you completed better novels out there.
Nice work by young man
Nice work by young man
Nice work by young man
Nice work by young man
Nice work by young man
Nice work by young man
Nice work by young man
Nice work by young man
Nice work by young man
I didnt read much, there where too many things not adding up in the story. wierd how it has soo many 4+ star raitings. From what is written seems to be his stats start out at those of healthy adult yet he takes 3 hours to run 5 miles, average walking speed is 3mph and that is taking into account unhealthy people. Stats are wrong every other chapter. Then when he is barley stronger than the average he procceds to beat up 3 people who have atleast some figthing experience since they are bullies, while im assuming he has 0 since author wrote he either runs away or escapes from then
I really admire your work author.The story is so intresting and i am eager to find out what happens next.Keep up the good work...Best wishes