Just trying to write a story and no story is perfect. Hope you enjoy it nonetheless and feel free to add feedback here or in the chapters! Been writing for a few years now but I still consider myself a newbie so go easy.
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Are you looking for a time escape novel? well this is for you.I must admit that the author really did a great job in writing this beautiful novel.Everything is well explain, and despite the fact that this isn't my typical kind of story, I'm still going to read.Ps. This novel will keep you to the edge (◔‿◔)
Name: 全民创世：开局一个上帝模拟器！Chapter: 141????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This novel has the potential I must say. I can sense the passion of the author in his creation. Though it was still not in its perfect form yet and has to be improved. But don't fret! You will improve in just a whim, you won't notice it. As I observe, you need to practice the flow of narration. World-building is solid and is its core. As for the character interactions, they were cheeky and wholesome. I can see myself when I am still beginning to write haha ? Good luck with your journey! All the best ?
my first time reading a faceslapping type novel. throughly enjoyed it. pity that only a few chapters. hope the author will mass release them.
Its a great novel but its lacks any real character. It's always the MC does this or that and no real feeling by any people in the story that makes you feel what kind of person they are.
I've only read up to the fiance part and I can say there is nothing for me to root for. Even the MC power makes things convenient and has everyone behaving like zombies without any free will of themselves. What kind of enjoyment is it to read when everyone doesn't have a mind of their own aside from the bland MC.
Another issue is the grammar and spelling issues. The author is in dire need of an editor. That all said I love the concept but I don't find myself wanting to read another chapter with no personality to speak of within the novel.
i havent read much and as such i wont be rating story as a whole. it may get better, but i just couldnt go past first 3 chapters. from style of writing, to actual conversations to story development it just screamed immaturity. maybe author has good idea for story, but it lacks in implementation.
If you are looking for a story without the usual cliches then this story is for you. There are no face slapping, young master BS, killing because of the slightest grievances to the MC or annoying love plots.
This story is set in modern times in an alternate earth where another world is merging with earth, causing space channels to open up, allowing powerful gods and their followers to invade earth. Our MC is a high schooler who stumbles across an OP knowledge artifact from the other world that eventually pushes him to be earth's top warrior.
This is probably the most chill MC that I've ever read. No real ambition besides his family safety and surviving the invasion. No harem. I enjoyed this story so much I finished the raws. I liked the ending, although it probably could have been better.
Note: Being a modern story written by a Chinese, there is some nationalism that is there but does not necessarily affect readability or enjoyment of the story.
was great but has now been dropped another update for 3 months and as usual no word from wn. as much as I do love the stories on this site the customer service is shocking. I would expect at least a tag or note that the story has been dropped.
A great war that swept all the world leaving none from its prying jaws of death... A soldier turned coward who ran away from those horrors for he has seen his loved ones, friends, war mates, his dearest all lost to the cruel war that none experienced and never expected... By a fluke he returned to past which he vowed to protect all those smiles and happiness., this is a story of war hero who's in quest to stop the great war from happening.
This is a story that tells us about morality, virtue, cruelty, happiness, sad, a mixture of war and endless court machinations going across the kingdoms courts... A story of betrayal a story of hope a story of enlightenment.....
Sigh...... I think I wrote a little tooo much....
Wow. This story is wonderful. I am so hooked up that I don't feel like starting another story until I complete this one. I love how things turned out for my guy, cloudhawk.
I love wasteland.