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It is a very good work and I can only recommend this!
The gramar is good if you can look over some miss type. Good characters and the story is good too!
I am very interested in this one. Rarely do I see fighting against aliens, it's usually befriending or coexisting with them[img=recommend]
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what a stupid mc after getting the system the stronger he gets the stupider he becomes . . .. . .. .. ... ... ... .... ..
As of ch. 20, the story is definitely humorous. I can’t help but feel like this novel is laughing at mmos. I am curious enough to want to know where the story is going to go.
I also want to ask the author, were you raised in a house full of women? Did they bully you a lot? Lol
why pick one option when you can pick 'all of above'
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This is a pretty good story and has a very light and Happy undertone to it. It is basically about a very strong guy whose Trying to make his way in potion selling. The only problems I have with it are the mc is way too passive and I get that it is his character but he sucks as a salesman. He can’t Negotiate At all and just gives massive discounts at random which puts me off. And the story has some bad grammar that could be fixed buy run ing it through grammarly.
I have to say, this story is clearly on point!
The whole description is enough for one to fantasize it just so we can get an idea of the scenery.
Writing quality is
This is a really cool novel. Ranging from the plot to the characters, everything is relatable and likeable. The writing might be improved, but the storyline, alongside the dialogues, is absolutely amazing. It was an enjoyable read.
Looking forward to more chapters!
it is pretty good.................................
it is pretty good.................................
it is pretty good.................................
I was just randomly trying not so popular books, but this really is a gem. The writing style is very good and fits with the theme and world. It combines many of my favorite tropes while bringing all the good parts of these tropes to the foreground. Mystery, magic, cultivation, it has it all without being convoluted. And above all, I don't feel like I am reading a story for braindead people, like most novels on WN.
Lackluster. The chapters are monotonous, there are more dialogues and system prompts than actual storytelling. The worldbuilding is confusing. The author does not have a satisfying vocabulary, he keeps saying "the fog makes the world gloomy" every two chapters or so.
Not worthy a read.