Wish there was a better grammar editing for this. It's hard to read in certain areas.
omg, the last time I tried searching it in webnovel. It wasn't there! just wow
I rarely gave very low review but I need to do for this one.
The MC is 5 years old female kindergarten kid.
As of now, the father the Holy Emperor never shows his face yet and the netizens keep getting faceslapped themselves.
The plot is repetitive and drag longer.
The story is sooo repetitive, always the same schema. 1st there is a problem, 2nd there is MC which everyone thinks of as an incapable fraud who cannot solve the problem, 3rd MC enrages the others even more, 4th MC slaps faces of enraged people by cheating with his library to solve the problem. Repeat this several times with different characters, settings and occupations, that's all till chapter 270...
Characters are really shallow, even the MC lacks personality. He has a greedy personality, likes to slap faces and loves to teach his students. Other than that he lacks natural talent and is only omnipotent because of his cheating library, which is kinda sad. That's basically all you can say about him and no real characterdevelopment happened so far. The characters capabilities grow, but only because of his cheatcode and not because of experiences.
The world and characters/animals lack descriptions. Often new characters/beasts and so on are only introduced with 1-2 sentences, so it's hard to get to love those faceless characters and plain settings.
Certain parts of the story are lacking any logic. Sometimes the omnipotent MC deduces things so detailed, that I wonder why the surrounding characters didn't straight away burn him on the stakes because of witchcraft, but they just accept it with pale faces... Other times the timeline is totally messed up. Until chapter 270, 20 days passed and in this time he read millions of books, but if you run some numbers with #books read and time needed to flip a book, there is no way that could be right.
TLDR: repetitive story with shallow characters/world and illogical parts.
I have no issue at all with the translator or update speed. The author however just doesn't write a good story.
He completely forgets about the main character's thirteen year old sister, and the character development is all over the place. Random events like the retarded snow white and the yeti is retarded. The world building is just bad. 90% of the time, I have no idea what the area the main character is looks like, nor the cities, nor the countries or the world. It's all grey fog.
It's just all around ****ty.
I really liked this for one of my first novels to read though I can't seem to envision what the characters and world look like but it's really Pog!
Bro as a bengali i am proud of you and it's really a cool novel loved it so far
I like the book……………………………………………………………….
Came back to give it another try and it is still as bad as I remember with sun par writing. The racism and nationalism of China better then everyone. The insanity of what is basically a story about a reincarnator reincarnating to a world where they get to reincarnate to maybe get abilities so they can go back and reincarnate again and again
I lik3 it so far I'm willing to keep reading if it comes out trial reads. told my bro about he says it sounds cool so he may read it as well.
Wow
Such plot
Much awesome
So many lost brain cells
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I’m honestly running out of ways to make this 140 characters
I really like this story, it is actually one of my favorites, but the translation really doesn't do it justice. There are missing words, wrong words being used, sentences that simply make no sense, parts that are simply not translated properly and probably many other kinds of mistakes and the text simply doesn't flow at all. I really think this novel deserves a better translator.
What I like about this story is the plot, the setting and the characters. I especially like the characters. I think the world building is a bit lacking, but the other aspects of the story make it up for that. I find the characters as well as the events unfolding in the story to be very amusing. Unfortunately, nothing can really make it up for that horrible translation. I myself feel forced to read MTL as I can actually understand that much better than this. I apologize for ****** these possibly painful remarks, but I'm just stating the truth.