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great grammar*check*
Nice build up *check*
Great plot *check*
Me adding to library *check*
Over all great read so far and can't wait for more
The story plot is really creative, i could really enjoy the way the story was going, but it's a bit confusing sometimes due to some manor grammatical errors. The author is doing well, you have my encouragement. Work hard, and you'll only get better and better.
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Dude. My eyes are aching.
I was intrigued by that one bad grammar review and nasty responses to it, and a truckload if 5* reviews...
So, I've decided to give it a spin, but, in all honesty, looks like machine translation that was left unatended. Just the first chapter gangbanged my poor eyes without a lube.
I don't have anything against people trying their hand on the art of writing, but I think you should at the very least respect your readers with some quality. As it seems, a lot of people are trying to support your story, why don't you ask someone to proofread and/or edit it for you? The 1* comes from writing quality, the rest is at it too just to not falsely boost the value, as I think the story itsekf can't be so vad if people git yoyr back.
Very original and picturesque story, I love it.
I would say that the main thing in this story will be the development of both characters and general and the originality of having two reincarnates
Good to read
Usually I am not much interested in cultivation novel but this is good and I have author another work. I came here to support him to write novels.
The first chapters were simply good, the story was great, the balance of power, the hero was ruthless and scheming, but I dropped him in chapter 25, simply a terrible mistake, this king revealed his great secret of being so easily incarnated (I doubt how he managed to survive with such stupidity) And by the legendary coincidence that he is the friend of the dear, sincere hero, whom he knows only from the game, and the hero easily disclosed his secret and all his secrets to this person who only knows him through the game. Is that the main character began to include the indigenous people of this world, to his loyal soldiers of the game, so that the absurd and stupid things will appear a lot because of this merger, especially the actions of the hero so that it becomes like the rest of the trivial Chinese characters,
I actually enjoyed this, keep up the good work
The greatest story that i have read online.
The pace of the story, the caracters, the worldbuilding are perfect. It feels so good to have secondary caracters that have a life and are not just here to be a filler.
Great job ! Really worth your time !
I would love a collector paper edition.
Mr Autor can you tell us when you will resume this novel ?
This novel i read from the start and i quite like it one of the best part is twist that in chapter 20 i like it ,i very exited about the next chapter
Yunno, I wasn't expecting much from the synopsis. I thought it would just be the usual outcast rising to glory story but I was wrong. Philip is incompetent only physically, his mind is nothing like that.
I don't think his mother died from natural causes, i suspect that she was assassinated or poisoned because he couldn't rule and the crown prince would be of questionable birth if his mother wasn't the Queen.
Moldovia's royalty, huh? she's a huge suspect, her son, Daniel and his father too.
It's funny how peoples character change in the twinkle of an eye. one minute the maid's giving him an open invitation, the next she's glaring because he rejected her advances. An the ridiculous part is she thinks that he didn't see her. Just plain old greed for a prince who won't even ascend the throne.
The plot is very rich.
Keep it up, author.