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The main character is a sîm p; the author tries to hide it under a veil of edginess though. FL cheats on him and he forgives her and aids her although she is legit a th0 t. The characters are all bland and repetitive, overall this is a overrated novel. Very unsatisfying to read; if you can't write romance don't! It ain't hard. Like seriously I feel like this novel gave me brain damage. Yes, it's that bad. This novel had the potential to be good but was ruined by a probably (?) hor ñý as§ author. World background is overall decent (very cliche though). Translation is quite good.
How will you translate chapter 1292 onwards? Raw and mtl readers will sympathize. It's all mumbo jumbo in the raws after that and chapters are repeated ,hard to connect the story, but till that it's good
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found it quite cringe, unoriginal and just boringit is too slow for my taste.......................................................................
I understand the need to have struggles for the mc but making him fail his cleaving his meridians after making one way for him to do it is crazy! Author makes mc struggle to much just to get one powerup. It makes you think that no matter what happens in the story with his talent he’l always be beneath what he should already be
Other than the part about the mc having to struggle with every breath and no break the novel is fine. World building is great!
The author has done a great job carving and molding such unique and spectacular characters. And the tale itself is so well spun, It’s hard to stop reading. Great job.
the concept is great and new.
there are less fanfics in this genre.
I just hope you will stop the s*x jokes and stop spoiling the story.
I really enjoyed other than that part.
low rating only because of the s*x jokes part as it is occupying major part of the story.
well i know that this is your fanfic I am just suggesting this as it will make story more enjoyable.
10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The Start is a story about a senior brother with a system, and a junior sister who went back in time after dying.
I have to admit, I really enjoyed this novel at the start. It was a interesting slice of life romance novel, however the story quickly went awry from there.
First off, the translation quality is quite poor. The first letter of many sentences are cut off, and sometimes words are entirely. There are countless mistakes throughout, but at the very least it's readable and isn't MTL. (3/5 stars)
The story development isn't that great. As previously mentioned, the story is about a senior brother with a system, and a junior sister who regressed. The senior brother's (Jiang Ming) system, allows him to gain various rewards for doing "ordinary" things. The start of the novel is pretty good, it reads like a cultivation slice of life novel with a slow romance. This rapidly changes. The main character constantly kills people in the dark for his junior sister. (After she somehow offends someone or gets too powerful) This, in turn, causes even more people to attack the main character. I am not even joking, but it even causes a war. It's downright silly. At this point, it's devolved into a story about a overpowered Xianxia character fighting anything that moves. Not to mention, the pacing is tremendously awful. Story goes from cute slice of life romance novel to world war 3 in less than 100 chapters, and they are already introducing different worlds.
There are also a few plot holes in the novel. For example, the main character obtains a "technique" that allows him to see people's information, and some secrets as well, as long as he knows their name. So, you would expect him to figure out that his junior sister has time traveled, however as of chapter 149, this hasn't happened. (2/5 stars)
Moving onto the character design. Main character still feels like a blank canvas to me personally. He hasn't changed from the beginning. He is exceedingly generic, to the point I can't pinpoint any unique personality traits. The junior is sister is generic as well, the only personality trait she has is that she is protective of her senior brother. As for the romance? I'm not sure. They randomly went from a pseudo-sibling relationship, to a romantic/sexual one, and I have zero idea what the turning point was. Most characters are rather one dimensional, but at least this novel has more variety than other cultivation novels. (2/5 stars)
World background is below average. World feels exceedingly small when only a few regions are vaguely described. I feel like the universe is more talked about than the planet the main character is on, which is rather weird. (2/5 stars)
Overall, novel isn't paced well, and the author seemingly went from slice-of-life to action novel, and it's very obvious when you read the novel. Everything regarding the novel is rather sub-par, more effort was needed in all aspects.
I think this novel would've been way better if the author simply kept it as a slice-of-life novel and focused on the romance and world-building, but that's just my opinion.
Chu Feng, Lin Fan, Ye Fan, Ye Chen. Expect it as template for chinese novel MC name
Not great but good enough to spend a few minutes of your day on, I wouldn't mind reading more of this. I don't really care that he tells others his stats and skills, I find the hiding of info from people trope a little annoying at times. Also it's not really detrimental to the story right now, it's not like others won't figure it out sooner or later. His luck might not be a super power i.e it's not dropping UBER AWESOME stuff for him but it's more than enough to give him a slight advantage. He's not wiping out his enemies with a wave of his hand, those types of novels are fun to read for a bit but it gets boring in my opinion. Overall a fun read.
Should really use the tags for what they're meant for. I dont care for reading an erotcia book with a sprinkling of fantasy. Thought it would be fine but sadly they didn't bother adding proper tags to it.