absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author?
Plea choose this book, it’s really a different plot thn I hv red before. Can’t wait to see how the story will unfold
This novel is good enough though i have read better. But as a beginner writer his writing is worth the appreciation. You have to remove the unnecessary chats and be straightforward to an extend. Still waiting for the next chapters to come
The book really interests me I love the character and their roles they really remind me about wars cause I also love war related stuff and the rest .
nice don't give do some more improvement and u r fine.
Setting is interesting, some characters are neat but the story is woefully inconsistent. The author writes things and then either ignores them or forgets about them. This leads to ham fisted plot devices and inconsistent characters.An example: the character describes a useful feature, the feature is automatically activated, and yet as the plot advances you realize it could have only happened in the way it did if the feature didnt work.Characters will say things to other characters but when the plot requires it its like they never did, like that part of their character only exists when necessary.MC also alternates between extremely foolish and unrealistically smart. Hes more concerned with face slapping than development but also thinks bad people will just be nice again.Oh and also, I feel this needs to be said he is very cruel to an innocent woman and I wont say more to spoil that. Its not worth reading beyond free. Author needs to keep track of what he writes about his characters, if he did that he could make full use of an otherwise brilliant setting.
Absolute Blockbuster I wish there was a game like this NovelBecause of your Story I understand now what Robert Habeck wanted to say. We need more Artists like you<3
The story has an interesting premise, though it leans on a somewhat cliché trope. That said, it still manages to maintain a unique charm. I've read the first ten chapters so far, and I have mixed feelings. While it's intriguing, it also feels a bit confusing at this stage, with some soft info-dumping. However, I’m still curious to see how it develops.
I read almost nothing here on WebNovel but I come to support this novel, who I give a very completely safe recommendation.
Dear author, please release more chapters daily. It's kinda slow and waiting doesn't feel good. Free chapter would be nice gift for my power stone.
Hey everyone ! New novel out, give it a chance and also remember that the author is a novice, Thank you ?
The strory was actually good ngl, the writing, the way the characters are described are all great. The writing style is impressive, and the characters feel real. The story's engaging, with well-crafted characters and vivid descriptions. However, it sometimes lacks depth in plot and pacing could be tighter.