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Hi my precious readers :) Although this is just a hobby, can I ask for your reviews? I mean, can I know if am I doing good? Or is my story sounds corny or a little cliche? I need criticisms since I am thinking of pursuing a writing career by publishing a book on amazon, thanks a lot though :)
I see a lot of potential for this book! I love how this is japanese-inspired. The author has a knack for story-telling in a way that does not confuse the readers even with the unfamiliar words. I see another great novel in the making. Great job, author! More chapters, please! ꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡
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I like it, even if it's only at the prologue. Although the world background needs more editing and the character design is lacking a little bit. Overall, everything's great!
read 40 chapters. basically guy reincarnated into sword and magic world with a system. MC is dumb, has OP maids, information isn't consistent, and grammar is horrendous.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Yay! I love BL, and I’m so glad to find a book with good quality BL here. The two main characters have adorable interactions. I definitely recommend this book! ?
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I remembered this novel's author is a Netorare sadistic writer. Even if the MC has 10 women, half of them are either stolen, commit suicide, raped, cheat him, die or chose a different path of his but the author makes it as the MC being the weak and blamed for the girls' relations Don't come crying for not being warned, I was the same innocent guy like you when I read one of his other works and even now I have a deep dislike when I see the Thousent Sorrow name.
this is so good,i love this book, can someone tell me how to use the golden ticket
Extremely dragged out. Every person in the novel is written dumber than rocks. Idiotic plays based on the MC wanting to be a righteous player.What else should even be said?I spent many hours reading this, yet hardly 1.5h passed in game. Chapters 5 to 60 are just two games (1h). And the second game isn’t even over yet. I expect it to last for at least another 10-20 chapters.The author writes the same thing many different times so you feel deja vu and feel like you’re reading the same thing four times in the same chapter.Let’s not even go into the ReactAndy chat and how that takes up more than half the novel, and another 20% is taken up by [XX donated YY gift] spamming.Below is essentially how I looked at the end of almost every chapter.