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"Alright" Ren agreed , which surprised Lena
He said "So now you are gang raped and u wont be talk of the town, or college dream girl, many people were contacting us for u. Ho how bad, I haven't introduced myself. I own one of the most famous PROSTITUTE COMPANY in India. I am Randheer Mishra. So many people want u to be their sexslave, their sub. I think u heard about BDSM. They want u to be a BDSM SLAVE for India's most prominent people.
"Oh, no, he had slept with me all night, and has often had me before, but he was not the first who had me, so that there was no violation nor seduction."
And that was fear.…
I love this so much it's not even funny. Little mushroom is so cutee!! ?
This is a really nice and interesting book. Please keep up the good work. I like how you use your imagination in the making of the book. It makes readers attracted to it. Plus it's funny.
Out of mind, out of sight?This is messed up
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So far so good, I just stopped at chapter 21 since I'm out of passes but it's a fun read. I like the Mcs powers but I think they need a more developed description, honestly, that's it, some things are rushed or glossed over and they don't need a long description but some easing into instead. like how I didn't even notice it was a 2-year time skip and am confused how she suddenly joined the military like what was the thought process behind that. but these might already be discussed later I'm just waiting to horde some more passes
I though it was going somewhere. Nope. So fast paced you'll think that the MC has a time skip of a few weeks every chapter powering up. Nope, he went to bed and woke up. Then everyone dies, their friends die, family dies, they looked at someone else and died. But that's okay, let's smile and say thanks for the help while breaking the fourth wall when the story needs progress the story or explain an issue without actually doing either one.
This is the second time I reviewed this story. It's a good story, and I like the way it's progressing. When it first started, I wasn't sure what he would do to make it work, but now I feel like he found something that can carry this story for many chapters. Don't want to spoil it too much, but worth a read.
