This is great.The writing and plot development leaves much to be desired, having a open background lets you add characters and elements into the story anywhere you want to but it's a bad habit to make.You need to foreshadow and plan more how things can go, stacking events and descriptors one on top of the other does not a story make, that's just bad writing.Even as a comedy you tend to lean towards the more serious side whenever a harsh topic comes up. It's too careless to just change the tone, you have to break the tense atmosphere properly before running with a joke.At times, you corral your character's personality into single sentence or single word statements. If this was purely comedy it's fine but when you mix drama you need to avoid pigeon-holing your characters to stereotypes. This makes them less a person and more like a set piece used to work the scene.You rely too much on light novel tropes who also rely too much on anime tropes. If you're good it works, but like most light novel authors you don't quite realize certain gags work better visually than on text.You should read more wholesome literary comedies or watch more British humor to balance your slapstick with punny wit.
Do these translators need to be more professional and tag ****, translate novels? translate the tags too.When placing the tag I remove this criticism.
Beast taming but with even less originality than usual.
How dare you use my name in a citation ! My name is holy, not something a puny human can have the courage to say! No seriously i was like ... what ? How ? XD
Five star review for this fan fiction!!! Great concept, and I truly had open my eyes toward this META essense stuff... Hope author can introduce me more fan fiction that involve META essense... Seems like a good material for story...
It is great and has a lot of potential like infinite Potential!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Interesting story but poorly written... The writing style and the bad grammar make it somewhat hard to have fun reading this. With an editor this might become a rather good story.
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I will not support nationalistic authors. No wait, this guy is not even an author. He is just a copy paster, who has taken a template and changed the main character's name. He doesn't deserve the title of Author. Webnovel, you should have learned this by now.
With all these bad reviews before the novel was even translated is causing this novel to be buried and not allowing more readers to see its colors.This novel is another OP reincarnation type novel. However, the MC wasn’t the strongest in terms of fighting in his past life, but was a renowned alchemist. He was lucky to have found a supreme cultivation technique that required him to die physically and live in spirit form for 1000 years(?) to comprehend a layer.Overall this novel is a good read; the character building of the main character(s) is sufficient to enough so the readers aren’t lost on whose actually relevant in the novel and not elaborating too much on the side(small) characters. A lot of novels here make this mistake of elaborating too much on side characters that end up being forgotten as the novel goes through different arcs.Bear in mind that the MC will always be OP since he has a lot of knowledge in his past life which in turn becomes a sort of plot armor for him. However this is also due to the fact that he also found an OP cultivation technique thus increasing his fighting prowess and potential in this new life of his.There’s enough here for readers to gain interest and have an enjoyable read. For those of you lacking in stones, add this novel so you can read it while collecting more. Cheers!
I liked this book a lot. I am waiting to see their wedding. Oh, I love vampire novels. There are not many vampire novels here, so my heartfelt request to the author is to keep writing vampire novels.
Incomplete book, why?!!!!