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The only and setting are amazing.Also,the character definition is trilling and addicting.But am so sad that it's a short novel??
For pokemon lover, this novel is really enjoyable to read, especially when the MC started collecting pet beast. The MC is quite ***** and stupid, he made mistakes here and there but i think thats his charm, in fact im glad that he's not some typical crazy OP faceslapping and arrogant MC like most system based novel has. And he's still 15! Still a green boy, so there r rooms for improvement. It's still early to judge this novel but so far its interesting read.So...keep up the good work Dear Author~**. My dear author, its only my personal wish but please please please don't make this a stupid romance harem novel with dense MC and stupid arrogant vixen wives, instead i suggest to make it like those shonen type books, and focused on friendship and adventure, with limited to none romance and smart heroine (if any). And i hope u add interesting side characters (preferably male lol) who has their own unique personalities and not just MC's cannon fodder/stepping stone. Ok that's all....and this is just my suggestion, and in the end everything is up to u, Dear Author. You don't have to listen to what i wrote here hehe, just u creating this story is enough after all... And im thankful for that. I wish you luck~
Nice!! keep goin thor.. gamer desa here support any Indonesian people who want to be novelis in webnovel. Wish the best for all Indonesian here.
While the author had an interesting concept, it is quickly lost in a pile of bad cliches. This could be forgiven if not for the poor writing and complete lack of consistency.
When I read the description, I feel like the novel is kind like LORD OF MYSTERIES and I really like it??????????????????????
Very interesting novel. I found it very addicting. The plot is good and different from other novels. I liked personality of Main character. Only thing lacking is small chapters with slow story progress.
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Only problem is that mc is kind of an idiot and never tries to exploit his (system is so easily exploitable, even a child could become stronger than mc way way easier and faster) system so that's kind of a letdown
@Author,Can you add plz a TAG for Ga#y or Trap, it's not for everyone this kind of stuff.Or a at least, explain Clearly the situation in the synopsis.Thanks in advance for your understanding.